9年陕西省中考满分作文赏析及点评

在我的世界里，四季是美好的：

In my world, the four seasons are beautiful:

春是美好的——春雨悄悄，春芽田田，春风煦暖，春燕呢喃，更有那郊外春耕的牛和脆生生赶牛的鞭响。

Spring is beautiful - the spring rain is quiet, the spring buds are in the fields, the spring wind is warm, the spring swallows are twittering, and the cows in the countryside and the whips of crispy cattle.

夏是美好的——夏荷款款，夏阳炎炎，满目青翠，百鸟齐欢，更有那一阵一变脸的天上的云朵和说来就来说走就走的风雨雷电。

Summer is beautiful - summer lotus style, summer sun is hot, eyes are green, birds are happy together, there are clouds in the sky with a change of face and the wind and rain thunder that come to say go.

秋是美好的——秋实累累，秋萤翩翩，秋溪鸣涧，秋雨缠绵，更有那百花尽杀才芬芳的菊和长途迁徙人字飞的雁。

Autumn is beautiful - it is full of autumn fruits, glittering in autumn, singing streams in autumn, lingering in autumn rain, chrysanthemums fragrant with killing flowers and wild geese flying in Chinese characters during long-distance migration.

冬也是美好的——冬雪皑皑，冬夜漫漫，冬天制造严寒，冬天体现温暖，最心醉的还是那迎春的窗花和过年的年饭与一张张满是喜悦的笑脸。

Winter is also beautiful - snow in winter, long winter nights, cold in winter, warm in winter, the most intoxicated is the window flowers and new year's Eve and a smiling face full of joy.

在我世界里，味道是美好的：

In my world, the taste is beautiful:

酸是美好的——因为酸象鼻子的伙伴，无论是醋的酸还是满腹的辛酸，都会让鼻子缩成一团。

Acid is good - because it's like a partner in the nose. Whether it's vinegar or full of bitterness, it makes the nose shrink into a ball.

甜是美好的——因为不论是男女老少，东方西方，大凡是人都喜欢那一丝丝甜甜的味道。

Sweetness is beautiful - because no matter men and women, old and young, East and West, most people like the sweet taste.

苦是美好的——因为只有吃过苦，知道苦，了解苦的人才知道什么是苦去甘来的道理。

Bitterness is beautiful - because only those who have suffered, know bitterness, and understand bitterness know the truth of bitterness.

辣也是美好的——你想一想，要是没有辣做铺垫，上面三种味道是多么的郁郁寡欢？！

Spicy is also beautiful - think about it, if there is no spicy bedding, how unhappy are the three tastes above?!

在我世界里，人生是美好的：

In my world, life is beautiful:

童年是美好的——可以随随便便哭闹，可以随随便便撒欢，可以牵着母亲的衣角要颗糖块来吃，也可以骑上父亲的肩头让自己看得更远。

Childhood is beautiful - you can cry, you can laugh, you can take your mother's clothes to eat, you can ride your father's shoulders to see further.

青年是美好的——因为血液的温度比其他的时段都高一点，所以就可以做一些出格、一些离奇、一些孟浪一点的事情，否则还真对不起那一点点高了些的血的温度。也因为有大把的时间可以“虚度”，所以就常常出格、离奇、孟浪以后能有时间来修正自己将来的航线。

Young people are beautiful - because the temperature of blood is a little higher than other time periods, so we can do something unusual, strange and a little menglang, otherwise I'm really sorry that the temperature of blood is a little higher. Also because there is a lot of time to "waste", so often out of the ordinary, strange, menglang can have time to modify their future routes.

中年是美好的——上有老下有小也许是一种负担，但更多的是自己甘愿承担着一切并品尝其实的味道——那一阵酸呀那一阵甜。

Middle age is beautiful - it may be a burden to have the old and the young, but it is more that you are willing to bear all and taste the real taste - that sour and that sweet.

老年也是美好的——男人站在自家的小院外，让自己的身形融进夕阳里面，看着一路走过的脚印，大声咳嗽一嗓子，然后给膝下的子孙讲述往昔的“功绩”；女人则把自己圈进摇椅，一晃一晃，在眼角眉梢挂上幸福的微笑，让自己随着日头慢慢变老。

Old age is also beautiful - men stand outside their own small courtyard, let their body shape melt into the sunset, look at the footprints they have walked through, cough loudly, and then tell their past "achievements" to the children under their knees; women circle themselves into the rocking chair, flash for a while, hang a happy smile on the corner of their eyes and brows, and let themselves grow old with the sun.

你说，还有什么不美好的呢？

You said, what else is not good?

呵呵，在我的世界里，一切都是美好的。

Ha ha, in my world, everything is beautiful.