2017届高考英语一轮复习AB分类练：专题15 短文改错（全国通用含解析）

　　专题十五　短文改错

　　2016～2017年各省市高考题A卷　全国卷

　　Passage 1　(2016·全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.

　　答案　

　　My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to

　　I live.Though not very big， the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even

　　to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables

　　high quality oil are

　　for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams

　　becoming rich in

　　short period of time.Instead，he hopes that

　　business will grow .

　　1．that→where　[考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]

　　2．去掉but　[考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。]

　　3．had→ have　[考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。]

　　4．honest→ honesty　[考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。]

　　5．or→and　[考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。]

　　6．using→used　[考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。]

　　7．在dreams之后加上of或about　[考查短语动词。固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。]

　　8．the→a　[考查代词的用法。in a short period of time为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。]

　　9．our→his　[考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。]

　　10．steady→steadily　[考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。]

　　Passage 2　(2016·全国Ⅱ)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

　　答案　

　　The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about

　　to do during the holiday.We can

　　between staying at home and

　　a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable

　　there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about

　　world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden

　　view and gain

　　we can not get from books.Some classmates suggest we

　　go to places of interest nearby.I

　　that it is a good idea.It does not cost ， yet we can still learn a lot.

　　1．how→what　 [考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达what to do，如果用how结构为how to do sth.]

　　2．chose→choose　[考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。]

　　3．take→taking　[考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为between...and...结构，根据前面的staying at home可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。]

　　4．but→and　[考查连词的用法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。]

　　5．world前加the　[考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。]

　　6．your→our　[考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。]

　　7knowledges→knowledge　[考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。]

　　8．去掉can或can→should　[考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。]

　　9．thought→think　[考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并

　　10．many→much　[考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost much花费很多。此处也可理解为much money的省略。]

　　Passage 3　(2016·全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

　　答案　

　　The teenage

　　from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and

　　years in my life.At

　　first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by .However，my parents didnt seem to think .They always

　　me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be

　　from them.I showed them I was independent by

　　strange clothes.Now I am leaving home

　　college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever

　　need help.

　　【语篇导读】　本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。

　　1．year→years　[13～19 岁的年龄，故用复数。]

　　2．worse→worst　[与前面的best并列，此处应用最高级。]

　　3．去掉the　[at first 固定短语。]

　　4．yourself→myself　[根据句意，此处指“我自己”。]

　　5．such→so　[so 指已经提到的事。]

　　6．tell→told　[此处应用过去时态。]

　　7．freely→free　[此处应用形容词作表语。]

　　8．wear→wearing　[此处用动名词作介词的宾语。]

　　9．to→for　[固定搭配 leave for 去……。]

　　10．whenever后加I　[whenever引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I。]

　　Passage 4　(2015·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.

　　答案　

　　When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I

　　I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in

　　countryside.There the air is clean

　　the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have

　　shown that global warming has already become a very

　　problem.The

　　we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must

　　ways to protect

　　environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.

　　1．think→thought　[考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。]

　　2．countryside前加the　[考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。]

　　3．or→and　[

　　4．on→with　[考查介词的用法。with the development of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着……的发展”。]

　　5．去掉been　[考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。]

　　6．seriously→serious　[考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。]

　　7．airs→air　[考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。]

　　8．Much→Many　[考查代词的用法。animals为可数名词复数，故用many。]

　　9．found→find　[考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原

　　10．your→our/the　[考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。]

　　Passage 5　(2015·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　答案　

　　One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy

　　a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After

　　at the toy for some time，he turned around and found

　　his parents were missing.Tony was scared and

　　to cry.A woman saw him crying and

　　him to wait outside

　　shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw

　　parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were

　　worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　1．parent→parents　[考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式]

　　2．on→in　[考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。]

　　3．去掉very　[考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so...that...为固定句型，意思是“如此……以至于……”，故去掉very。]

　　4．looks→looking　[考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与look at之

　　5．去掉where或where→that　[考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。]

　　6．begun→began　[考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was scared并列，因此，要用一般过去时。]

　　7．telling→told　[考查并tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。]

　　8．a→the　[考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。]

　　9．saw后加his　[考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。]

　　10．terrible→terribly　[考查副词worried之前要用副词来修饰。]

　　Passage 6　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully

　　tomatoes at no cost!

　　答案　

　　Nearly five years ，and with the help

　　our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these —we

　　been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As

　　result，the plants are growing .The fruits are small in size，but juicy and .There are so

　　that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year， we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing

　　tomatoes at no cost!

　　1．before→ago　[ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是planted，用的是过去式，故用ago。]

　　2．by→of　[with the help of...在……的帮助下。]

　　3．year→years　[由前面all these可知应用year的复数形式。]

　　4．had→have　[根据时间状语“since then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。]

　　5．as后加a　[as a result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。]

　　6．somewhere→everywhere　[因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这everywhere到处；somewhere某处。]

　　7．taste→tasty　[are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。]

　　8．much→many　[根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的many，而much修饰不可数名词。]

　　9．去掉but或改为yet　[although引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以yet连用。]

　　10．wonderfully→wonderful　[因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。]　

　　Passage 7　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m.and ends at 3：30 p．m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with after－school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

　　My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

　　答案　

　　My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m.and ends at 3：30 p．m.. are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We

　　need to do so

　　homework.Therefore，we have more time

　　after－school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half

　　and play sports for one hour every day.

　　My dream school

　　like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or

　　by the lake listening

　　music.The teachers here are kind and .They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

　　1．They→There　[考查固定句型。There be句型，表示“有”。故把They改为There。]

　　2．didnt→don’t　[考查动词时态。此处叙述每天要做的事情。应该用一般现在时，故把didnt改为dont。]

　　3．many→much　[homework是不可数名词，故用much修饰。]

　　4．with→for　[考查介词词义辨析。此处句意是“为课外活动留出更多时间”。]

　　5．hour→hours　[考查名词单复数。one and a half hours为一个半小时。]

　　6．look→looks　[考查主谓一致。school为单数名词，故谓语用looks。]

　　7．去掉the　[There be句型中的名词是泛指概念，故去掉the。]

　　8．sat→sit　[考查动词时态。根据前句内容可知此处是接情态动词can，故用动词原形。]

　　9．listening后面加to　[考查固定短语。listen to“听……”。]

　　10．helpfully→helpful　[此处and连接并列的两个形容词kind和helpful。]

　　Passage 8　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.

　　I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall，with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice，which set himself apart from others in our small town，he was strong and powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have never known.

　　答案　

　　I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to

　　me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she

　　away.She is just a distant memory for me now.

　　I remember my grandfather very .He was tall，with broad

　　and a beard that turned from black

　　gray over the years.He had a deep voice，which set

　　apart from others in our small town， he was strong and powerful.In a

　　fact，he even scared my classmates away

　　they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have

　　known.

　　Passage 9　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner，that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting，it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.

　　答案　

　　The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner， might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon

　　another meal of

　　day.，it had a connection

　　the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally

　　from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good

　　with handles to suit British habits.This made for the

　　in the porcelain industry.

　　B卷　地方卷

　　Passage 1　(2016·四川)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　It is Mothers Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

　　Mom has a full－time job，so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.

　　答案　

　　It is Mothers Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

　　Mom has a full－time job， she has to do most of the .She is a great mother.Both Dad

　　I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We

　　up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went

　　shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in

　　hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in

　　kitchen.The dishes

　　I cooked were Moms .At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and .

　　1．so→but　[前后句之间为转折关系。]

　　2．houseworks→housework　[housework是不可数名词。]

　　3．or →and　[both...and是固定搭配。]

　　4．get→got　[这里说的是发生在过去的事情，因

　　5．去掉on　[go shopping去买东西。]

　　6．her→his　[爸爸去购物，从句主语是he，因此物主代词形式用his。]

　　7．kitchen前加the　[上文虽未提及kitchen，但听话者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen前加定冠词。]

　　8．what→which/that或去掉what　[引导that/which，也可省略。]

　　9．favoritiest→favorite　[favorite 为无等级形容词。]

　　10．moving→moved　[moving多用来修饰事物，moved用来指人。]

　　Passage 2　(2016·浙江)

　　下面短文10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，wed greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!

　　My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.

　　答案　

　　When I was a very young ，my father created a regular practice I remember well years .Every time he arrived home at

　　end of the day，we’d greet

　　at the door.He would ask who we

　　and pretend not to

　　us.Then he and my mother would have

　　a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they ，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit

　　the top of the fridge.It was both

　　and frightening to be up there!

　　My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.

　　1．children→child　[因为前面有不定冠词a，所以这里用单数。故children改成child。]

　　2．late→later　[late是形容词“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但是“一段时间后面应该接later”，表示“……时间以后”。故late改成later。]

　　3．at后面加the　[at the end of 为固定搭配。]

　　4．her→him　[根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。用him指代my father，作greet的宾语。故her改成him。]

　　5．was→were　[这句话的主we，谓语用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一般过去时。故was改成were。]

　　6．knowing→know　[pretend后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否定式pretend not to do。故knowing改成know。]

　　7．去掉had　[would do 表示“过去常常做”。]

　　8．chat→chatted　[根据主句内容my father would lift my sister 可知while引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。故chat改成chatted。]

　　9．in→on　[on the top of...为固定搭配，意为“在……顶部”。故in改成on。]

　　10．excited→exciting　[这句话的主语是形式主语it，真正的主语是to be up there，主语是物的时候，表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。故excited改成exciting

　　Passage 3　(2015·四川)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；

　　2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

　　3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Hi, Janice，

　　Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I dont like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?

　　Please help with me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　答案　

　　Hi, Janice，

　　Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really

　　want

　　share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I

　　you last time, I made three new

　　here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We’ve been spending a lot of time

　　in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I dont like to go anymore,

　　I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you

　　me，would you talk to ？

　　Please help

　　me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　1．want后加to　[考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。]

　　2．tell→told　[考查时态。根据时间状语last time可tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。]

　　3．friend→friends　[考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。]

　　4．sing→singing　[考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型spend...(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。]

　　5．many→much　[考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。]

　　6．so→but　[考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。]

　　7．How→What　[考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。]

　　8．are→were　[考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，……。]

　　9．him→them　[考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。句意：你会和他们说吗？]

　　10．去掉with　[考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。]

　　Passage 4　(2015·陕西)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My soccer coach retired

　　in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

　　At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　答案　

　　My soccer coach retired

　　in last week.I wanted to do

　　special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the

　　biscuits in the world，so I

　　to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic

　　of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor

　　I was packing them up.

　　At

　　party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just

　　get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me

　　the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　1．去掉in　[last week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。]

　　2．anything→something　[something用在肯定句中，表示“一些事”，anything“任何事”。]

　　3．better→best　[我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。]

　　4．decide→decided　[全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。]

　　5．step→steps　[根据前面的some，step应该是复数形式。]

　　6．well→good　[作表语的是形容词good，well是副词，作状语。]

　　7．after→when/while　[我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。when/while当……的时候，after 在……之后。]

　　8．a→the　[此处表特指，at the party 在晚会上。]

　　9．just后加to　[动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。]

　　10．enjoy→enjoying　[and连接两个并列的(动)名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。]

　　Passage 5　(2015·浙江)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left－hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.

　　答案　

　　My old classroom was interesting because three

　　of the classroom were made

　　glass.I enjoyed

　　close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left－hand side of the class，I could

　　see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom

　　also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around .Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in

　　hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me

　　like I was dreaming. I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.

　　1．side→sides　[考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。]

　　2．from→of　[考查固定表达。be made of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be made from是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。]

　　3．sit→sitting　[考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。]

　　4．easy→easily　[考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。]

　　5．is→was　[考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。]

　　6．them→it　[考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数a beautiful park要用it。]

　　7．去掉not　[考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。]

　　8．in后加a　[考查固定表达。in a hurry匆匆忙忙。]

　　9．felt→feel　[考查非谓语动词。make sb do...使某人做某事。]

　　10．If→Although/Though　[考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不

　　Passage 6　(2017·浙江)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

　　Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

　　No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket－owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.

　　答案　

　　I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was

　　and filled with people.

　　Before long，a train inspector

　　to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket

　　became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching

　　the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from

　　owner.The person who found

　　ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

　　No one in the carriage had

　　spoken to or even noticed the ticket－owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the

　　their help.If we could show concern to others

　　need，the world would be a better place to live in.

　　1．去掉had　[考查时态一致。文章主体时态为一般过去时。]

　　2．noise→noisy　[考查词性。be动词后应用形容词，noise为名词。]

　　3．comes→came　[考查时态，before long后用一般过去时。]

　　4．but→and　[考查句子关系。一位乘客意识到他的票不见了，他开始不安起来。应为承接关系，而非转折

　　5．searching后加for　[考查固定搭配。search for＝look for寻找。]

　　6．his→its/the　[考查代词指代。此处是票的主人用its或主人the owner。]

　　7．a→the　[考查冠词。上文提到过用the表特指。]

　　8．previous→previously　[考查形容词、副词用previous是形容词。]

　　9．strangers→stranger　[考查前后一致。从上文看，丢票的是一个人，故应用单数。]

　　10．on→in　[考查固定结构。in need需要。]

　　Passage 7　(2017·四川)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；

　　2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don’t panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately.

　　答案　

　　Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk

　　what you should do when a fire alarm

　　off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait

　　your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and .Dont panic or get out of line，and

　　to remain quiet and .Soon the firefighters will come and put out

　　fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead

　　back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing

　　hurt，tell your teacher immediately.

　　【语篇导读】　这是一篇实用文体，向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法。

　　1．with→about　[talk with后面常跟指人的词，意思是“同某人交谈”。talk about意为“谈论”。]

　　2．gogoes　[表达客观事实通常使用一般现在时态。a fire alarm为单数名词，故谓语动词应当用单数第三人称形式。]

　　3．在wait之后加上for　[wait为不及物动词，后跟宾语时要加上介词for。]

　　4．classmate→classmates　[classmate为可数名词，此处应当用复数形式。]

　　5．trying→try　[根据and一词可

　　6．calmly→calm　[由并列连词and可知本词与quiet都作系动词remain的表语。故词性应与quiet一致。]

　　7．a→the　[前文已提到火灾，这里特指那场火。]

　　8．us→you　[根据短文意思可知这是老师告诉同学们的一些注意事项。用的均是第二人称。]

　　9．去掉when　[宾语从句中使用了两个连接词，根据句意“如果你们注意到有人失踪或受伤……”可知when是多余的。]

　　10．and→or　[如果某人失踪了，就无法判断他受伤与否。这两个词之间是选择关系，故用or。]

　　Passage 8　(2017·陕西)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

　　One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky－they were looked like rain！We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

　　That day I didnt learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

　　答案　

　　My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted

　　teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all

　　along with bows and arrows for hunting.

　　One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire， our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles

　　jumped up and shot their arrows

　　the bird. of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows

　　flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain！We ran to escape

　　fortunately no one was injured.

　　That day I didnt learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt

　　impressive lesson about gravity!

　　1．He wanted后加to　[考查非谓语动词。want to do sth想要做某事，为固定搭配。]

　　2．come→came　[考查动词时态。本文的主体时态为一般过去时。]

　　3．have→having　[考查非谓语动词。一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，因此此处应为非谓语动词作伴随状语

　　4．immediate→immediately　[考查形容词副词修饰关系。副词修饰后面的动词jumped up。]

　　5．on→at　[考查介词的使用。shoot at...朝……射击。下文的Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky.也给本句提供了答案。]

　　6．Neither→None　[考arrows一词可以看出，此处不是只有两只箭，因此把Neither改为None，表示三支以上。]

　　7．was→were　[考查主谓一致。主语为复数形式arrows，谓语动词应用复数。]

　　8．去掉were　[考查语态。look作为系动词，无需用被动语态。]

　　9．but→and　[考查连词。根据句意：我们跑开了，幸运的是，没有人受伤。可以看出，此处为承接关系，

　　10．a→an　[考查冠词的使用。后面的impressive一词第一个读音为元音，因此用an。]

　　Passage 9　(2017·辽宁)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Jeremy and Alice，

　　Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors，were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word，your dog—Cleo.

　　Weve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.

　　We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.

　　Sincerely，

　　Jack and Rose

　　答案　

　　Dear Jeremy and Alice，

　　Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors，were hoping to settle something that bothers

　　us.In a word，your dog—Cleo.

　　Weve called several

　　about Cleo’s early morning barking.It is difficult to

　　why she barks every minute she’s outside.The early morning barking

　　been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.，Cleo tends to bark

　　average of six hours a day.This morning she

　　barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us，considering how

　　the houses are.

　　We appreciate

　　apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure

　　a good way of settling the matter.

　　Sincerely，

　　Jack and Rose

　　1．去掉to　[bother为及物动词，无需加to。]

　　2．time→times　[当“次数”讲时，time为可数名词。]

　　3．understanding→understand　[动词不定式符号to后跟动词原形。]

　　4．have→has　[主谓一致问题。主语为单数，谓语动词用单数形式。]

　　5．Beside→Besides　[besides除此之外，连词。beside在……一边，介词。]

　　6．a→an

　　7．starts→started　[考查时态。今天早晨的事情自然用一般过去时。]

　　8．closely→close　[考查形容词close和closely的区别，房子距离近用close，具体意义；closely表抽象意义。]

　　9．our→your　[考查人称代词。我们感激你的歉意，后句的you给本题提供了答案。]

　　10．figure后加out　[考查固定搭配。figure out找出。]

　　Passage 10　(2017·四川)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；

　　2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty，but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary, my best friend，asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time，I let her copy my answers.But after the test，all of us were called to the teacher’s office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn’t cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?

　　答案　

　　Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test ，but I tried

　　to do it.Suddenly Mary, my best friend， me to let her to copy my answers.After

　　for some time，I let her copy my answers.But after the test， of us were called to the teachers office .The teacher was angry because we had

　　same answers in the ．We were warned not to cheat again

　　she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why

　　she punish me?

　　Passage 11　(2017·陕西)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

　　We lived in a comfortably double－room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high－speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

　　It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

　　答案　

　　My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we

　　Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,

　　it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

　　We lived in a

　　double－room with a big bath.What I liked best

　　the free high－speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared

　　my friends many photos

　　in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local .

　　It is such agreat hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of

　　who is going to Beijing.