2017届高考英语一轮复习AB分类练：专题16 书面表达（全国通用含解析）

　　专题十六　书面表达

　　2016～2017年各省市高考题A卷　全国卷

　　考点一　提纲类

　　Writing 1　(2016·全国)

　　假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

　　1．主题：环境保护；

　　2．展览时间；

　　3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文

　　【参考范文

　　Dear Peter，

　　Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you?ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

　　Hope to hear from you soon.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Writing 2　(2016·全国Ⅲ)

　　假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约

　　1．表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Bob，

　　How is everything going? I’m writing to express my regret at being unable to go to the bookstore with you next weekend，which I have promised.I feel terribly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.

　　What makes me concerned is my final exam which will be held two weeks later, so I have to make a preparation for it at that time.I hope you could appreciate that I must spare no effort to do well in my final exam if possible.Could we make another appointment to go to the bookstore together?

　　I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Please let me know what time is OK for you.Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Writing 3　(2015·新课标全国Ⅰ )

　　假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

　　1．栏目介绍。

　　2．稿件内容；

　　3．稿件长度：约400词；

　　4．交稿日期：6月28日前。

　　1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头语已为你写好。

　　Dear Peter，

　　Id like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Peter，

　　Id__like__to__ask__you__to__write__an__article__for__our__school?s__English__newspaper.

　　The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have our article before June 28?

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　Writing 4　(2015·新课标全国)

　　假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

　　1．出发及返回时间；

　　2．活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．结语已为你写好。

　　Dear Lucy，

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Lucy，

　　Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which will make them happy.We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon.

　　If you are able to come with us，please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

　　Looking__forward__to__your__reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　Writing 5　 (2017·大纲全国)

　　一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

　　1．家庭；

　　2．工作；

　　3．业余生活。

　　注意：1.词数100

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头语已为你写好。

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

　　【思路点拨】

　　1．主题：“十年后的我”；

　　2．内容要点：家庭、工作、业余生活三方面。

　　3．段落层次：适当插入连接词使文章层次分明，并且增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，内容充实。

　　4．

　　【参考范文】

　　I__often__imagine__what__my__life__will__be__like__in__the__future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty－eight years old by then.I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child.I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer.I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I’ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time，Ill continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games.On my holidays，Ill travel around the world.In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.

　　考点二　图画、图表类

　　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，

　　注意：1.词数100左右。

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3．参考词汇：住宿accommodation

　　【思路点拨】

　　内容要点：

　　1．参加为期六周的英语班

　　2．询问：

　　(1)课程开始时间、每周课时

　　(2)每班人数

　　(3)学费、住宿

　　3．合适的结尾

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad，and Id like to know something more about your six－week English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　考点三　应用类

　　Writing 1　(2016·全国)

　　假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mr.Jenkins，

　　My name is Li Hua, and Im one of your students in the International Economy and Commercial Department.I’m writing to ask you for some help.

　　In order to earn some extra money and reduce my family’s burden, I’d like to go to a foreign trading company to find a part－time job in the coming summer vacation.Ive finished the application and personal resume.But I’m not sure if they are written well enough to catch their eye.Please refer to the attachments which include the application and resume.

　　I’d appreciate it if you could help me revise them.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　Writing 2　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

　　航班号：CA985

　　到达：8月6日上午11：30

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头语和结束语已为你写好。

　　Dear Peter，

　　How are you doing?

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Peter，

　　How__are__you__doing?

　　Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.Also, I’d like you to do me a favor.Since this is his first visit to the U．S.，would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel？Thank you in advance！His flight number is CA985，and it will arrive at 11：30 a．m.on August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.

　　Looking__forward__to__your__reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　Writing 3　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

　　1．外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)；

　　2．象征意义；

　　3．价格。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头语已为你写好。

　　Dear Tom，

　　How are you doing？　

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Tom，

　　How__are__you__doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots online for me.I made them myself with red silk threads，cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond，about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China，these knots stand for friendship，love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only $12.99 each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots，please let them contact me.Also，do let me know if you need further information.Thank you!

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　Writing 4　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

　　内容主要包括：

　　1．自我介绍(包括英语能力)；

　　2．参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；

　　3．希望获准。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　Regards，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Sir__or__Madam，

　　Im Li Hua，a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it.I’ve been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English.What is more，Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

　　Looking forward to your reply!

　　Regards，

　　Li__Hua

　　B卷　地方卷

　　考点一　提纲类

　　Writing 1　(2016·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中Jim回信，内容包括：

　　1．该人物是谁；

　　2．该人物的主要贡献；

　　3．该人物对你的影响。

　　注意：1.词数不少于50；

　　2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Jim，

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Jim，

　　Its great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.

　　As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He，in his book，Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World)，introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact，he inspires me to major in English in college，to be a bridge between China and the world.

　　Interested in knowing more？I can find you some books！Just let me know.

　　Cheers!

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　Writing 2　(2016·四川)

　　某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：

　　1．你最喜欢的季节；

　　2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．题目已为你写好；

　　3．行文连贯，语篇完整；

　　4．文中不得透露个人真实信息。

　　【参考范文】

　　The Season I Like Best

　　If someone asks me which season I like best，I can tell him without hesitation that spring is my favorite of the four seasons.

　　Two reasons may account for why I like spring best.In spring，the weather gets warmer and the days get longer.Everything begins to grow.Many kinds of flowers start to come out，which give the earth a pretty coat，making this world a better place to live in.Besides，I like to go camping in spring and I feel so refreshed in the surrounding of nature.I will forget all my bad moods when walking in nature.

　　Spring is my favorite

　　season.

　　Writing 3　(2016·浙江)

　　“Planning is good，but doing is better”是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100～120词的短文。

　　要求如下：

　　1．简述你对这句名言的理解；

　　2．用一个具体事例加以说明；

　　3．给出恰当的结尾。

　　注意：1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数)；

　　2．文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

　　Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better

　　【参考范文】

　　Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better

　　Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

　　My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event，I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that，I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic，wrote a speech，and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

　　I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

　　Writing 4　(2017·福建)

　　如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”

　　—Sir Winston Churchill

　　【内容要求】

　　1．你对该引语的理解；

　　2．你的相关经历；

　　3．恰当的结尾。

　　注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

　　3．词数：120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that　

　　【思路点拨】

　　这是一篇话题类作文。①要求根据引120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

　　【参考范文】

　　This__quotation__from__Winston__Churchill__tells__us__that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.

　　Actually，we cant succeed in everything we try.What’s important is that we should stick to it.

　　Writing 5　(2017·重庆)

　　Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。

　　假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：

　　•赞同Susan的看法

　　•你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么

　　•该礼物的意义

　　•期待大家回复

　　注意：1.词数不少于80；

　　2．符合语言规范；

　　3．开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

　　I am a high school student from China.

　　【参考范文】

　　I__am__a__high__school__student__from__China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love.It does’t matter whether it is expensive or not.What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.

　　Years ago，I received a gift from a friend on my birthday，who is now living far away.It delighted me at the sight of it.It was a piece of paper cutting，a Chinese traditional art.With the gift，he included a letter，in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself.It took him several weeks to learn to make it.Thats why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.

　　Now，it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom.Whenever I look at it，I couldnt help thinking of my friend.However far away we are，we feel close to each other.So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.

　　Writing 6　(2017·重庆)

　　请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

　　A mother said，“My son is always on the phone，sleeping，out with his friends，or in his room.He never has time to talk to me.”

　　要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；

　　2．紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

　　3．词数不少于60。

　　【思路点拨】

　　此类文章类型主要以论述的方式为主，需要围绕所提供材料的主题，进行举例论证，表达自己的观点和看法，本文属于半开放式作文，让学生举例并对引文的观点进行论证。该类题目要求学生灵活处理所给材料，做到综合分析，辩证思考，归纳要点，提炼观点，力求论点合理，论据充分

　　【参考范文】

　　Many children often try to appear independent, communicating with their parents as little as possible, which hurts their parents deeply.I think as a child, young or old, we should tell them something about our friends, how we are going in our study or work.At the same time, we can share some interesting experiences with them, thus reducing their concern about us，including our daily life.What’s more, we can pour out our troubles facing us, releasing our pressure from different aspects.After all, parents are our best friends.So please communicate more with them.

　　Writing 7　(2017·浙江)

　　请以“One Thing Im Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：

　　1．记述事情经过；

　　2．简要说明你感

　　注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。

　　One Thing Im Proud of

　　【思路点拨】

　　写作之前，考生需认真审题，明确写作要求，可划分写作要点如下：1.令自己得意的事是什么及叙述事情发展过程(注意时态为过去时)。2.从中得到的启发(一般现在时)。同时注意关联词的选用。

　　【参考范文】

　　One Thing I’m Proud of

　　I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

　　The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skilful they were，I was determined to be just as good.Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

　　I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”

　　Writing 8　(2017·陕西)

　　假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

　　【写作要点】

　　1．做家务的理由；

　　2．做家务的过程；

　　3．你的感受。

　　注意：1.短文词数不少于100；

　　2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　I am an 18－year－old middle school student，

　　【思路点拨】

　　本书面表达要点一目了然，层次清晰。考生可根据要点将文章分为三段进行叙述。此外，重要的是要把握好时态。

　　【参考范文】

　　I__am__an__18－year－old__middle__school__student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that，I began to think about what to do to help.

　　Last Sunday，when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept and mopped the floors.

　　At this very moment，my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was，I never felt so happy.

　　考点二　图画、图表类

　　Writing 1　(2016·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语

　　注意：词数不少于60。

　　提示词：地球日Earth Day

　　【参考范文】

　　A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

　　Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn－out clothes，pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles，and turned those into dolls，handbags，tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

　　We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

　　Writing 2　(2015·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英语稿件。

　　注意：词数不少于60。

　　提示词：一个面团 a piece of dough

　　面人 dough figurine

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇图画作文，用图画的形式展示了一个活动过程。写作时要认真审读四幅图画，理清其内在的逻辑关系，交代清楚活动的时间、地点、人物和活动的具体内容；同时运用恰当的过渡词，把四幅图画的内容连成一个有机的整体。

　　【参考范文】

　　Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.

　　When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.

　　We hope we can have more activities of this kind!

　　【亮点点评】

　　1．本文注意使用了过渡词汇first，then，finally等来衔接句子和段落，使文章更有条理，行文连贯。

　　2．时态把握准确，主要运用了一般过去时，文章上下文时态保持一致。

　　3．恰当运用了高级结构，如非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table...；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.等，让文章靓丽起来。

　　Writing 3　(2015·福建)

　　请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

　　【内容包括】

　　1．描述画面；

　　2．概述其含义；

　　3．谈谈个人感想。

　　凿壁偷光

　　注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；

　　3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：凿，钻：bore

　　In the picture，　

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇漫画类作文，要求根据图画展示内容，写一篇120词左右的短文。

　　写作要点：1.描述图画(一般现在时)

　　2．概述其含义(取自中国古代成语“凿壁偷光”，概述其内容，并渗透“刻苦求学”的思想)

　　3．谈个人感想(根据这个成语想到自身如何去做)

　　【参考范文】

　　In__the__picture,__we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

　　This is a well－known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldnt afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文简明扼要，要点齐全，信息丰富，条理清晰。灵活运用了高级词汇，如：shabby, be absorbed in, afford, spare no effort, acquire knowledge, get discouraged, count等，体现出作者丰富的词汇积累能力。句型上，运用了强调句型，丰富了句式结构；最后一句起到了画龙点睛的作用，是一篇上等佳作。

　　Writing 4　(2015·江苏)

　　请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。1．The other day, a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo.It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane, and insisting that it leave the track.The photo drew about 7，000 comments on the social media platform.Despite the thumbs－up(点赞) given to the old lady, some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.

　　2．Some riders of e－bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic.Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.

　　3．From 2005 to 2017, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million.Currently, China had 15% of the worlds total vehicles.

　　【写作内容】

　　1．用30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

　　2．结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；

　　3．根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

　　【写作要求】

　　1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

　　3．不必写标题。

　　【评分标准】

　　内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

　　【思路点拨】

　　书面表达部分属于给材料作文的类型，提供了文字和图表相结合的三份材料，要求考生在概要叙述材料的基础上，分析导致交通问题的主要原因，并从社会规范和个人行为两方面讨论自己

　　【参考范文】

　　The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples.

　　Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large－scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.What?s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

　　In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone don?t secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybody?s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

　　【亮点点评】

　　文章要点齐全，语法知识应用灵活，且使用得当，堪称佳作。文中开头就使用not only...but also 句式，使行文非常连贯。高级词汇in spite of, because of, whats worse，keep...in order等强调句式，虚拟语气的应用等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。

　　Writing 5　(2017·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。

　　注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。

　　2．词数不少于 60。

　　Last Monday，　

　　【思路点拨】

　　文章应包含以下几点内容：1.爸爸与“我”和妈妈道别出差；2.“我”发现妈妈生病；3.在“我”的精心照顾下，妈妈恢复了健康；4.爸爸归来，对“我”进行了表扬。

　　【参考范文】

　　Last__Monday，my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip.He would be away for three days.Just the next morning，I found my mother wasnt feeling well.She had a cold.I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.With my special care，my mother recovered quickly.When my father came back home，my mother told him what had happened.He praised me for what I had done.

　　I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

　　考点三　应用类

　　Writing 1　(2015·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括：

　　1．介绍训练营的相关内容(例如：时间，地点，参加者等)；

　　2．说明你打算参加的原因；

　　3．询问对方的意向。

　　注意：1.词数不少于50；

　　2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　提示词：龙舟训练营

　　Dragon Boat Training Camp

　　Dear Jim，

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇典型的邀请信，重点是李华邀请美国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，要按照邀请信的格式进行写作，即发出邀请，介绍活动的时间，地点，内容，参加原

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Jim，

　　Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder if you’d like to go with me.

　　This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.

　　Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了邀请信的一些常用语如Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I wonder if you’d like to go with me.文中的时态把握较好，使用了一般将来时和一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情。

　　Writing 2　(2015·四川

　　假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

　　1．表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

　　2．说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

　　3．给出讲好普通话的两点建议；

　　4．提出你学习英语的具体需求。

　　注意：1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

　　Hi Sharon，

　　This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

　　Li Xia

　　【思路点拨】

　　考查应用类作文。在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结1、 2；第二段写要点3；第三段写要点4, 以及希望得到对方的回信。

　　【参考范文】

　　Hi__Sharon，

　　This__is__Li__Xia.I__learned__from__your__post__that__you__want__to__improve__your__Mandarin．I am quite interested in it.I think Im fit for it.As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.In addition，I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.So Im quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

　　Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin every day.As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese，see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

　　In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward.It is just what I want.I’m eager to improve my English.So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

　　Hope for your early reply!

　　Li__Xia

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life；表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。

　　Writing 3　(2015·天津)

　　假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。

　　(1)自我介绍；

　　(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；

　　(3)询问对方的其他需求。

　　注意：1.词数不少于100；

　　2．请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

　　参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union

　　Dear Chris,

　　Yours，

　　Li Jin

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Chris，

　　Im Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang Middle School.Now I have a piece of good news to tell you.

　　Our school will donate 5，000 copies of different valuable books to your class, which include popular science books, classic works and so on.Popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way and they can help you understand science subjects better and arouse your curiosity about scientific discoveries.Classic works present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer you joy and excitement, but also encourage you to think critically.

　　We will take these books to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year.

　　If you have more needs, please let me know as soon as possible.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Jin

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全，较好地完成了规定的任务，同时也应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，包括不定式to tell you作后置定语，非限制性定语从句which include...，连接词and的灵活运用，not only...but also...连接并列谓语，if引导的条件状语从句等。总之，全文结构紧凑，句际间连接顺畅，是一篇难得的佳作。

　　Writing 4　(2015·陕西)

　　假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。

　　Volunteers Wanted

　　Our annual English Festival，which will be held on June 15－17，2015，is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate.If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.【写作要点】

　　1．表达写作意图；

　　2．陈述应征目的；

　　3．说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。

　　【写作要求】

　　1．邮件词数不少于100；

　　2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯；

　　4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　Dear Ms Chen，

　　Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2, Grade 3.　

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇应用文，要求根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。文章要求明确，思路清晰，是学生熟悉的话题。

　　写作要点：1.表达写信意图(申请“英语文化节”学生自愿者)

　　2．陈述应征目的(如：提高英语能力，交流能力等)

　　3．说明应征条件(性格，能力等方面)

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Ms__Chen，

　　Im__Li__Hua，a__student__from__Class__2，Grade__3.Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

　　I really want to obtain

　　this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organisational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

　　As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates.Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.

　　I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.

　　Looking__forward__to__your__reply.

　　Yours__truly，

　　Li__Hua

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全，完全符合应征邮件的要求，层次分明，脉络清晰。开门见山地表达了写信的意图，并对自己应征目的和应征条件分别进行了阐述，同时在文章最后表达了自己的信心和愿望。文章中的by offering my service，as well as，such...that...，以及非限制性定语从句的使用都是文中的亮点所在；同时，organisational ability，communication skills，appreciate，live up to your expectations等高级词汇运用也体现了作者深厚的语言功底。总之，是一篇不可多得的佳作。

　　Writing 5　(2015·重庆)

　　Bookcrossing.com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享(wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(controlled release)，即直接传递给另一位参与者。

　　假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：

　　·表明写信目的

　　·选择一种分享方式

　　·简述做出该选择的理由

　　·希望了解更多信息

　　注意：(1)词数不少于80；

　　(2)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】

　　考查属于书信类

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Sir__or__Madam，

　　Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide，I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.

　　Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release.Of the two，the latter wins my favor.By means of controlled release，I only need to deliver books to other participants，not only are books shared but also it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.

　　If you could provide more specific information，I would be well

　　grateful.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Hua

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种短语和高级句式，如not only...but also；build up；分词作状语：Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide；定语从句：I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading 等。

　　Writing 6　(2017·天津)

　　假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：

　　1．表示欢迎

　　2．介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气，饮食等)

　　3．介绍本班情况

　　4．希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊

　　注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实

　　2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

　　3．词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　4．参考词汇：交换生

　　exchange student

　　Dear Chris，

　　Im Li Jin，monitor of Class One，Grade Eleven.　

　　Yours，

　　Li Jin

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__Chris，

　　Im__Li__Jin，monitor__of__Class__One，Grade__Eleven.Im glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.You’re welcome to stay with us.

　　Our school is located in a northern city of China，where you can taste many kinds of delicious food，because it is well famous for its snacks.Our city witnesses four different seasons，plenty of sunshine and good rainfall，but in winter you may feel a little cold.

　　Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls，who are warm and generous and ready to offer help.They are very friendly and easy to get along with.You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.

　　Yours，

　　Li__Jin

　　Writing 7　(2017·陕西)

　　假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

　　写作要点：

　　1．表示对客人的欢迎；

　　2．介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等)；

　　3．表达对客人的祝愿。

　　写作要求：

　　1．词数不少于100；

　　2．称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；

　　3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　Dear American guests，

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是应用文写作，写一篇欢迎词。

　　1．内容要点：

　　(1)欢迎

　　(2)活动介绍(目的，内容等)

　　(3)祝愿

　　2．人称：代表学校欢迎国外代表团，故应用第一人称I或者we。

　　3．时态：一般现在时

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear__American__guests，

　　On behalf of our school，I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.

　　As scheduled，we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The programme consists of the following activities：recitation，singing，word spelling，storytelling and so on.The Show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre.

　　Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.

　　I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.

　　考点四　开放、半开放类

　　Writing 1　(2016·江苏)

　　请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

　　In recent years，internet voting has become increasing popular in China.People not only cast on－line votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”．

　　Li Jiang，a high school student，is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition，organized by the local

　　government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote，or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

　　【写作内容】

　　1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

　　2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

　　【写作要求】

　　1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

　　3．不必写标题。

　　【评分标准】

　　内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

　　【参考范文】

　　On－line voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

　　In my opinion，on－line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space.Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

　　To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore，I hold a positive attitude towards on－line voting.

　　Writing 2　(2015·湖北)

　　请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Questioning is a bridge to learning.When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer，you will learn.

　　注意：1.无须写标题；

　　2．除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　5．词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】

　　It is hard to imagine one can learn without questioning，in other words questioning is a bridge to learning or is the very beginning of learning.Take learning English for example，when we learn the meaning of the phrase “pick up”，our first reaction is what it means and how we can use it.Such a question keeps us going on learning.Then come the following questions: can we find a sentence where we can use it? Or can we find a dictionary to look it up? After the questions being put forward one by one，our actions go further and further，until we get a good command of it at last.So when you are beginning to learn something，dont be shy to ask questions，only with the questions can we have the inspiration to learn something new or do better than before.

　　Writing 3　(2015·安徽)

　　某英文杂志正在举办以 “Fancy yourself as an interviewer” 为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview” 为题， 写一篇英语短文。

　　内容包括：

　　1．采访的对象；

　　2．采

　　3．想提的问题。

　　注意：1.词数120左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

　　4．短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

　　A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇命题材料作文，作文的写作要点已经给出，考生需要根据提示进行写作，必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右，标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性，不能出现与本人有关的信息。

　　【参考范文】

　　A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

　　The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

　　I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

　　If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

　　【亮点点评】

　　范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I would like to interview，原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it，②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样化；范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only...but also...；one of the...；the first to do sth, be interested in；a great deal；such...as等，使作文的内容得到了丰富；范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。

　　Writing 4　(2015·浙江)

　　在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下：

　　1．从以上两种做法中选择一种；

　　2．以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

　　注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇开放式写作，属于议论文的范畴。首先确定人称以第一人称为主，表达自己的观点时以一般现在时为主，讲述具体事例时以一般过去时为主。主要内容分为两部分：1.首先明确自己的观点：坚持自己的观点还是尊重大多数同学的意见，二者只能取其一。2.以具体事例阐述你这么选择的理由。写作时注意用词准确，句际间连贯性要强，使上下文衔接，浑然一体。

　　【参考范文】

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it.By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

　　Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a good time that day.Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文结构清晰，要点全面，层次清楚。写作中使用了较高级的词语为文章增色不少，同时准确使用了复杂句子结构，包括非谓语动词to deal with...，doing so，where to go，going to等，when引导的时间状语从句，while引导的对比句，because引导的原因状语从句，not only...but also...连接的并列结构等。

　　Writing 5　(2015·湖南)

　　请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

　　As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

　　注意：1.续写词数不少于120个；

　　2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【参考范文】

　　As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

　　When I was young, I was very shy.I didn’t dare to speak in public.When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.

　　One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text.I recited it fluently.The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates.I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it.The next morning, I was asked to recite the text that I had prepared.Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me very much.I was so proud of myself that day.

　　After that, I was frequently praised before my classmates and began to gain confidence.I tried even harder and the teacher praised me more.Eventually，I overcame my shyness.It was the teacher’s praise that made me become a better student.

　　Writing 6　(2017·湖北)

　　请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：1.无须写标题；

　　2．除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　5．词数不少于120

　　【参考范文】

　　It isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation.Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society，I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　Writing 7　(2017·山东)

　　某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

　　1．A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　　2．Where there’s a will，theres a way.

　　注意：1.词数：120～150；

　　2．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

　　参考词汇：谚语 proverb

　　【参考范文】

　　Where theres a will, there is a way

　　I can’t agree more with the view.In our daily life，we will face all kinds of challenges and difficulties.As long as we possess a strong will to get through such hurdles instead of running away from them，we will possess success and a brilliant future.

　　Take myself for example.I was born in a poor family，and my parents are both laid－off workers.I do cherish the educational opportunity my parents offer to me and I always adopt the motto—“Where there is a will，there is a way”—with advantage to serve as a reminder.Although I meet with huge barriers，I am going ahead while at school.For example，I am buried under piles of textbooks and study around the clock to prepare for the College Entrance Examination.Through my constant efforts，I believe I can change not only my own fate but also the worrying situation of my family.

　　Therefore，I firmly believe that our future depends on a strong will.

　　Writing 8　(2017·重庆)

　　请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

　　“My friend falls，I laugh；my phone falls，I cry.”

　　要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；

　　2．紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

　　3．词数不少于60。

　　【参考范文】

　　When I hear that someone says，“My friend falls，I laugh；my phone falls，I cry.” I feel rather annoyed and surprised.What he says suggests that he cares little about others’ pain or trouble，even if theyre his friends.Moreover，it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.

　　Personally，it is completely wrong of him to behave with such an attitude towards others and life.As a matter of fact，none of us can live alone in society.We all depend on others sometimes to some degree.If everyone does and thinks as he does，hell not live any longer in the world.

　　I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need.Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble.Otherwise we’ll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.That is what the saying goes：“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.