2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错4

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

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　　假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

　　修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分

　　Many teachers worry the effects of television on young people. According to studies, some children spend many time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things what they don’t real need.

　　2.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　As a boy grown up in India，I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the stories my

　　father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in 1970s. My big moment finally

　　come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to Europe, where my

　　father was to attend for a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt was such nice that

　　even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and thorough enjoyable，even

　　someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.

　　3.短文中共有10处语言错误。 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处开始起）不计分。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号^, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用 划掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下面划个横线—, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：不按规范改不给分。

　　Music and songs play an important part in our daily life. For an example, it can bring us pleasure and make us happy. Besides, they can help us improve our learning efficient. I fond of listening to songs and music very much, but my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me back into the time when I am loved and cared by Grandma. What's more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood when was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow. In a word, once enjoying, the song will never be forgotten.

　　4.短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

　　Four years ago, a heavy earthquake hits Wenchuan and the surrounding areas. Four years later, great changes have taken place in the worst-hit areas. Till now, ninety-five percents of reconstruction projects have completed, and governmental goals for reconstruction have been met basically. The new classrooms are much better than the previously ones, equipping with many new and advanced teaching equipment. The wheelchair-accessible construction make it convenient for the students disabled in the earthquake to go to the dormitory and classroom. However, the needs of the children affected by the earthquake are carefully considered about. A mew Wenchuan is raising from the ruins, and people are on their way to a best life.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Ken,

　　I’m very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I’m glad you had a wonderfully time during the past summer holiday . Last summer I take

　　a trip to the countryside with some of my friend . Country life, in my opinion,

　　gave me peace and quiet , which is what I can’t enjoy in big cities . There was

　　river nearby , in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never

　　imagine what fun it was to swimming together with friends in the cool , clean

　　river in such hot days . In fact, I had never been had a better holiday before.

　　I took plenty of photos there and I keep them where I can see them every day

　　as they always reminds me of my stay in the country.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ping

　　6.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Therefore, I am very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to bookstore on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missed. Now I have two strong locks.

　　试卷答案

　　1.．worry之后加about。 ．many改为more。 ．Because后加of。

　　．read改为reading。

　　．program改为programs。 ．noise改为noisy。

　　．On改为In。 8．去掉want前的to。.what改为 that．real改为really

　　2.

　　As a boy grown up in India，I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the stories my

　　growing

　　travel

　　father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in1970s. My big moment finally

　　his

　　the

　　come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to Europe, where my

　　came

　　father was to attend for a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt was such nice that

　　so

　　even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and thorough enjoyable，even

　　it

　　thoroughly

　　someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.

　　like

　　3.

　　Music and songs play an important part in our daily life. For an example, it(they) can bring us pleasure and make us happy. Besides, they can help us improve our learning efficient(efficiently). I ^( am) fond of listening to songs and music very much, but (and) my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me back into the time when I am(was) loved and cared^ (for)by Grandma. What's more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood when (which) was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow(fellows). In a word, once enjoying( enjoyed), the song will never be forgotten.

　　4.

　　Four years ago, a heavy earthquake hits Wenchuan and the surrounding areas. Four years later,

　　hit

　　great changes have taken place in the worst-hit areas. Till now, ninety-five percents of

　　percent

　　reconstruction projects have ∧completed, and governmental goals for reconstruction have

　　been

　　been met basically. The new classrooms are much better than the previously ones, equipping

　　previous

　　equipped

　　with many new and advanced teaching equipment. The wheelchair-accessible construction

　　make it convenient for the students disabled in the earthquake to go to the dormitory and

　　makes

　　classroom. However, the needs of the children affected by the earthquake are carefully

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　　considered about. A mew Wenchuan is raising from the ruins, and people are on their way to a

　　rising

　　best life.

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　　5.

　　Dear Ken,

　　I’m very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I’m glad you

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　　had a wonderfully time during the past summer holiday . Last summer I take

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　　a trip to the countryside with some of my friend . Country life, in my opinion,

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　　gave me peace and quiet , which is what I can’t enjoy in big cities . There was

　　∧river nearby , in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never

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　　imagine what fun it was to swimming together with friends in the cool , clean

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　　river in such hot days . In fact, I had never been had a better holiday before.

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　　I took plenty of photos there and I keep them where I can see them every day

　　as they always reminds me of my stay in the country.

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　　6.

　　I like riding my bike.Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find∧very convenient

　　it

　　to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike

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　　almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter

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　　carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to ∧bookstore

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　　on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missed. Now I have two

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