2015考研英语看图作文范例点评:养老足球赛
写作原文
As is depicted in the picture,a poor old man,rolling like a football,is kicked between his three sons and daughter.Unwilling to be responsible for their father ,the daughter and sons spare no effort to kick the old man as far as possible.We are irritated to see in the picture the pathetic fact that these people go to any length to avoid surporting their parents. Unfortunately, what we have seen in the picture isnt a rare phenomenon. However,what factor it is that results in this situation? For one thing, in my opinion, the decreased importance attached to the moral education contributes to the lack of ethnic conception,leadiing to the consequence that paople don t esteem and value their parents . For another ,faced with the pressure of work and house installment ,young people can hardly make ends meet let alone taking good care of their old parents who is fragile to a sudden disease such as heart attack.There is no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem by the government .To handle this worsening situation,more money should be involed in the pension to guarantee the daily life of old people. In addition, instead of merely focusing on the scores,schools ought to put more stress on moral education.
总体点评
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