2016届广西柳江高考英语二轮复习短文改错实效训练（4）

　　2016广西柳江县高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（4）

　　短文改错。

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.

　　【参考答案】4.

　　Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　students

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors

　　or

　　first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take

　　in

　　possible

　　their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the

　　believe

　　environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from

　　graduating或加who

　　leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to

　　choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a

　　cannot或can’t或后加not

　　good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if

　　we

　　a

　　【2016模拟题】第一节

　　短文改错 ( 共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　短文改错

　　1. 去掉for

　　2. the –her

　　3. similarly—similar

　　4. he—she

　　5. interesting—interested

　　6. Beside—Besides

　　7. such后加a

　　8. Whichever—whatever

　　9. believed—believe

　　10. learning--learn

　　短文改错。

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　【参考答案】5.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　disliked

　　She

　　be

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　friendly

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Or

　　Please give me some advices.

　　advice

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　短文改错。

　　文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

　　注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　【参考答案】6.

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after

　　with

　　school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of

　　the

　　full

　　every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am

　　her

　　allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my

　　be

　　study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.

　　eyes

　　In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.

　　watching

　　work

　　Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at

　　has

　　删除at

　　abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,

　　66.

　　the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring         67.

　　Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world         but could make the most delicious dishes．One time, I just couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner．As I was        about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in        71.

　　the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head, she said, ‘It       isn't a good time to do that, dear．' At once I apologize      and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You         know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month．"      6.boy前加a

　　67.去掉when

　　68.cooker改为cook

　　69.but改为and

　　70.√

　　71.about后加to

　　72.Shake改为Shaking

　　73.apologize改为apologized

　　74.me改为myself

　　75.month改为months