2016届广西柳江高考英语二轮复习短文改错实效训练（3）

　　2016广西柳江县高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（3）

　　短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　【参考答案】1.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for riends

　　with

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　disliked

　　She

　　be

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　friendly

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Or

　　Please give me some advices.

　　advice

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　(2015·山西省四校联考)

　　Ladies and gentlemen，

　　Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often took part. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here when it was set up.

　　We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here.

　　答案：

　　Ladies and gentlemen，

　　Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years . Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often

　　part.

　　around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested . We also exchange experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here

　　it was set up.

　　We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in

　　here. It is a

　　supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of . If you want to know

　　about the Corner, you may talk to the students here.

　　1．before→ago　三年前three years ago。before与完成时连用。

　　2．took→take　Every Sunday提示我们要用一般现在时。

　　3．Gathering　考查非谓语动词，句子的主语we是gather的逻辑主语，且是主谓关系，故用现在分词。

　　4．interested后加in　be interested in, in 不能省略。

　　5．my→our　人称保持一致，主语是we，故用our。

　　6．when→since　自从建立起，数千人就来到这。since后的从句用一般过去时，主句用现在完成时。

　　7．activity→activities　要用可数名词activity的复数形式。

　　8．really→real　a＋adj.＋名词。

　　9．of去掉 或者helpful→help　用主系表结构，去掉of;

　　或者be of help有帮助。

　　10．much→more　如果你想了解更多关于英语角的信息，你可以来这里和学生们交谈。

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Though great progress has made in science these years, there

　　are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living

　　by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school

　　because they have no enough money to send their children to there.

　　Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?

　　The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing

　　country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to

　　produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,

　　but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

　　【参考答案】2.

　　Though great progress has∧ made in science these years, there

　　been

　　are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living

　　living

　　by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school

　　things

　　because they have not enough money to send their children to there.

　　Why∧ you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?

　　do

　　The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing

　　in

　　country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to

　　we

　　produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,

　　children

　　but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

　　clearly

　　短文改错We are all busy talk about and using the Internet

　　76. ________

　　which set up in the 1960s. At first, the Internet was

　　77. ________

　　only used by the government, but in early 1970s,

　　78. ________

　　the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to

　　79. ________

　　use it, too. Otherwise, computers were still very expensive

　　80. ________

　　and the Internet was difficult to use it. By the

　　81. ________

　　start of the 1990s, computers become cheaper and easier.

　　82. ________

　　Today it is easily to get on-line and it is said

　　83. ________

　　that millions of people use the Internet every day.

　　84. ________

　　Send e-mail is more and more popular among students.

　　85. ________

　　It has now become one of the most important parts of people’s life.

　　【参考答案】3.

　　76. talk---talking

　　77. set 前加was

　　78. early 后加the79. 去掉the

　　80. Otherwise ---However

　　81. 去掉it82. become 前加had

　　83. easily---easy84. √

　　85. send 改为sending

　　【西南师大附中】

　　第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：请在答题卡上作答。