大学英语四级最新作文超级模板(4)

　　第一段：称呼

　　Dear Mr. President,

　　第二段：引出写信的目的

　　主题句： This letter comes to you from ____.

　　扩展句： In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.

　　第三段：对学校食堂正面的看法

　　主题句：As you know, _____ . But unfortunately, ______.

　　扩展句：1、___. As a result, _____.

　　2、Besides, ______.

　　3、And whats more, _____.

　　第四段：对学校食堂负面的看法

　　主题句：Some people may argue that ____.

　　扩展句：1、For instance, ____ and ____.

　　2、But in my opinon, ______.

　　第五段：结尾，表明自己看法

　　结尾句：To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.

　　扩展句：I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks.　Li Ming

　　作文结构填充

　　第一段：称呼

　　Dear Mr. President,

　　第二段：引出写信的目的

　　主题句： This letter comes to you from one of your students.

　　扩展句： In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.

　　第三段：对学校食堂的看法

　　主题句：As you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. But unfortunately, we dont find the service there satisfying sometimes.

　　扩展句：1、 The food is not as nutritious as it should be. As a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.

　　2、Besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.

　　3、And whats more, the fare is also a little higher at university.

　　第四段：别人对食堂看法

　　主题句：Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.

　　扩展句：1、For instance, Ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.

　　2、But in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.

　　第五段：结尾，表明自己看法

　　结尾句：To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,

　　扩展句：I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks.