浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（83）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend  ∧  weekend with you．Luckily

　　the

　　I was completely free then, so I’ll

　　to  say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at

　　  am

　　 around 8 pm in  Friday evening．

　　on

　　Susan,

　　I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Ming

　　第二节： （共题；满分 分）’m a boy of 18 in Senior two. I like arts, especially dancing. I want to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend, but my parents don’t permit me to. I’m very upset and need your advice.

　　Peter

　　注意：

　　１．词数120左右；

　　文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　Peter,

　　You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend.

　　Yours,Tom

　　Susan,

　　I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able

　　glad

　　to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find∧difficult to get

　　because/as

　　it

　　to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the

　　minutes

　　right

　　Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you

　　and

　　together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.

　　about

　　Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

　　Have

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Ming

　　Impossible version:

　　Peter,

　　You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend.I understand your situation. Maybe your parents are worried that you will spend so much time on it that your study will be affected.

　　I suggest you have a good talk with your parents. You can also turn to your dance teacher for help. You should make your parents aware of the benefits of the training class. For example, the training will build up your body and make your mind relaxed. Good health and a sharp mind will certainly contribute to better study results in turn. What’s more, you can communicate with more people and learn a lot about society. Of course, you must practise that you will not spend too much time on it.

　　I’m sure your parents will agree with you in the end.

　　Yours ,

　　Tom