16日雅思写作解析及预测

　　Writing Task One

　　【考察题目】

　　Writing Task Two

　　【A类考试题目】

　　City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.

　　Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?

　　【题目翻译】

　　住在城市中的人很少与邻居交流，这种群体意识已经消失。

　　为什么会发生这种情况?如何解决这个问题?

　　【题目关键词】

　　1-city dwellers

　　2-socialize with

　　3-neighbors

　　4-a sense of community

　　【写作小贴士】

　　对于这种提出问题、分析问题并解决问题的题目，我们并不陌生，文章整体布局四段，namely，introduction, causes, solutions and conclusion，关键是第二段causes的整理搜集和第三段solutions的对症下药。现在邻里之间很少交流，首先，All sorts of people are swamped with their own employment, which leads to the fact that they can hardly set aside sizeable chunks of time to socialize with their neighbors.其次，信息技术的飞速发展使人们花在surf the internet上的时间越来越多，从而对人与人之间的关系产生了巨大的影响，we are all actually aware the great revolutions of the past 20 years are in the area of communications technology and this is having a profound effect on relationships. There has never been anything in human history like the personal computer. Who could have foreseen that in a short span of years, the internet would hold more information than all the books that had been produced in the world since writing began? But when we try to address the concepts of community in todays world it is the manner in which computing has influenced the interaction between people that interests us.最后，犯罪率的居高不下，导致人与人之间缺乏基本的信任，这也促使了人与人之间交流的减少，we all share a fundamental need to belong and feel connected. And when this is missing, we should expect anything but love for people around us. We feel connected when we sense that we have something in common with a particular group of people. it may be that we share with them the same geography---we live in the same town---or that we share a passion for the same football team, the same political party, or because we are members of the same club. Community is that place where we feel a sense of belonging. Within our community, we experience our lives as having meaning. Being part of this group makes us feel we are part of something greater than ourselves. Without them, we feel painfully isolated; with them, we sense that we can achieve something greater than any one of us could on our own.

　　第三段在给出solutions时，注意围绕上述第二段的causes来写，可从个人、群体和政府这三个角度进行构思，communities are complex living things that have their own way of operating. Unless local people are actively engaged and accountable in bringing about change, innovations rarely become a regular part of daily life. While professional services are built around peoples deficiencies, a sense of community is built on an appreciation of peoples gifts. A sense of community depends on each of us being able to appreciate the relationships we have, no matter how inconsequential they seem, and to value the daily encounters with the people who provide the services that make our lives possible.