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　　I am a sincere audience of movie and often spend my space time with my family comes(前面已经有这句话的谓语动词了，这里应该用非谓语动词) to the other cinema of yours. I am so happy when I heard(am 和heard的时态要保持一致) from my friend that you will be establishing(建议改成establish) a cinema at the Road. The reason why I am so happy is that it no far with(from)my home. It is my great honor if you could answer my questions.

　　To begin with, could you tell me the time about your opening day? Because a comedy movie to show next month. I wish I can watch it in your cinema. Moreover, Will(w小写)you take some preferential activity? It is near holiday, I have more time to go t o watching.