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　　I am a teacher in a middle shool(拼写错误). I want to organize some students to your town for the historical exhibition. I am writing to inquire about the following information.

　　First of all, what is the size of(加定冠词the) exhibition, what is its theme and what will be displayed on it? Secondly, when it will be held and what is the opening time?

　　I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there are student tickets and what is the discount.(你第二段的内容不是很多，这一部分应该写在上一段) I am looking forward to your early replay .