考研英语小作文批改道歉信0-4分例文1

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　0-4分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Jone,

　　I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of Chinas industry organized by Shan Dong University.

　　The reason is that I have been invested to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold by the world economic organization as academic critics during October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Jone,

　　I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of Chinas industry organized by Shan Dong University.

　　The reason is that{I have been invested(用词不当)to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold(改为held) by the world economic organization as academic critics｝ during(改为from) October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　4分

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