英语复习资料:作文范文批改,在线考研频道编辑整理。
考研英语待批改作文:
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Dear Prof.Wong,
I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.
To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
Sincerely yours,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Prof.Wong,
I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(删除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (删除)prevented me from any activity.
To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
Sincerely yours,
LiMing
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同学你好,作文写的很好,但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事,因此要用过去时。
虚拟语气的概念
让步状语从句
表示"一…就…"的结构
引导名词性从句的连接词
关系副词引导的定语从句
比较can 和be able to
条件状语从句
先行词和关系词二合一的应用
谓语需用单数的情况
指代意义决定谓语的单复数
结果状语从句
比较may和might
定语从句的概念
混合条件句的概念
表示选择的并列结构
原因状语从句
真实条件句的应用
as, which 非限定性定语从句
need "不必做"和"本不该做"
if only和only if 的区别
what/whatever;that/what; who/whoever的比较
连词的概念
wish的用法
关系代词引导的定语从句
表示转折或对比
并列连词与并列结构
and 和 or 的区别
非真实条件句的应用
虚拟条件句的倒装
名词性wh-从句
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