考研英语小作文批改道歉信8-10分例文2

　　英语复习资料：作文范文批改，在线考研频道编辑整理。

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　0-4分

　　Dear Prof.Wong,

　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.

　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　LiMing

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Prof.Wong,

　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(删除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (删除)prevented me from any activity.

　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　LiMing

　　8分

　　同学你好，作文写的很好，但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事，因此要用过去时。