考研英语小作文批改邀请信5-7分例文2

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Miss Yuan,

　　There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Miss Yuan,

　　There will be a celebrity(改为celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同学你好，写作文的时候再细心一些，注意单词的拼写。背单词时要把词义背牢。