But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
Paragraph I:引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; 简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Score: 14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
Paragraph II:提出一种观点或优点;本段的支持性分论点;本段总结。
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.
注:1. 本段总分总结构
2. they argue that = they think that
3. with the development of... 随着的发展
4. whats more 递进关系,moreover
5. bad = pornographic 色情的 violent 暴力的
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:Paragraph III:承上启下的过渡句; 提出另一种观点或缺点;本段的支持性分论点本段总。
But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
注:1. But 转折词
2. they emphasize that = they think that
3. todays society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比
4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge;
获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge
5. knows nothinglittle;he may be uselesshe may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:Paragraph IV:平衡两种看法;给出自己的观点。
Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.
Score: 11分
When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
注:结构非常好,可以套用。
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
注:1.people, who...,应去掉逗号,改为限制性定语从句。
2. as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones
3. lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb. astray
4. they suggest that = they think that
5. touch 碰
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that to know more, to read more. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
注:1. hold 认为 同样表示think的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold
2. the best book 在西方国家是圣经的意思
3. to know more, to read more 错误,中式英语
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
范文22. Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?
Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in peoples lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.
注:it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为
As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into ones room.
雅思写作模板:网络带来的利弊
雅思写作:着眼细节 规范标点
雅思写作高分模板:同意与否型作文
雅思写作模板:Agree or disagree
雅思写作高分模板:利弊关系型作文
雅思小作文攻略+范文:曲线图
雅思写作培训类题目分析
雅思写作:图表作文的写作辅导(英)
雅思写作提分还需创造语言环境
雅思写作经典加分句型
三句话提点你的雅思写作
雅思写作素材:分析型和一边倒写作模板
如何让雅思写作的开头更吸引考官
雅思写作task2审题策略
烤鸭教你如何准备雅思写作8分素材
雅思写作高分模板:信息描述或数据比较
雅思写作高分模板:利弊分析型作文
经典雅思写作加分句型
雅思写作模板:交通发展带来的矛盾
雅思写作:地图题写作思路分析
雅思写作高分模板:开放观点式作文
雅思写作高分模板:观点一面倒的作文
雅思写作细节解读之标点须规范
雅思写作高分模板:原因问题及解决
雅思写作高分模板:单一观点式作文
雅思写作复习“十字真经”
雅思写作素材:媒体词汇及句型
雅思写作模板:小作文经典开头
雅思写作高分模板:意见两边倒型作文
雅思写作模板:个人不能改善环境?
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