看了一些SAT官方范文,对比自己的作文,发现SAT官方作文具有以下特点。尽管许多内容已经很重复了,可我还是想总结一下.
中心:在首段用一个较为复杂的句式表述清楚,这个很重要
结构:我用的是首段-例子一-例子二-结尾的模式。还算可以,不过别的结构如三个例子,一个例子,两个例子一个议论段也可
语言:较少语病(当然即便范文也是有语病的,每读一篇6分的都发现几个小错误);句式复杂(长句,定语、状语等从句,虚拟语气,转折等等)。文字不见得很优美,可是逻辑性要好
内容:避免罗列事实,但要有一定细节。每个例子后面一定要有议论,比例大概为4:3-5:3
衔接:最好用较明显的句子衔接。也是得分点
结尾段:并不是得分点所在,一句话结尾的,甚至没写完的6分文也大有所在。
字数:超过一篇半。
做到以上我感觉5分差不多,6分也是有希望的了。希望各位网友能帮我补充补充,谢谢!
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