考研英语待批改作文:
Dear Sir:
I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.
I graduated form Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.
I would be grateful if you could grante me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir(因为不知道是男士还是女士,所以用Sir or Madam):(英语中用逗号)
I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.
I graduated form(from) Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially(加介词with) foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.
I would be grateful if you could grante(拼写错误) me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming 点评:5-6分第二段写的不是很好,最好从你的学历、经历和脾气秉性方面写,不要只写一个方面。考试中的作文内容是可以编造的,因为考察的是你应用某种问题的能力。
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