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Everyone has their owe(own) fridens ,somebody has a lot of friendswhile others have a few.But everyone has at least one friend.On(no) one is alone.
Making fridens is an easy thing but finding a good friden(friend) is not easy.A good friden(friend),who must be a sincere person and(who)we can trust each other.
Fridenship isveryimportant for us because we can share happiness and sorrowis with fridens.If you have some problems and you can ask for help from them,you can talk it and take some advices from your friends.
And if you have some happy things you can tell them ,they must be happy too.
文章整体立意没有问题,但是第二段描述找到好朋友不容易缺少支撑的观点和示例,过于单薄,另外几点建议:
1、单词的拼写要特别注意
2、定语从句的使用还没有掌握
3、标点符号和大小写要注意
批改老师:郝月菲
郝月菲,(查看郝月菲老师介绍) 英文名Hazel(被学生戏称为黑狗老师)英语专业八级,功底深厚,发音纯正,美式口语地道。毕业于北师大二附中的郝老师非常了解京城中学学生英语学习需 求,信奉实用趣味励志的英语教育理念,坚持以兴趣为主导,不断挖掘学生对于英语的热情。郝老师拥有非凡的个人魅力,幽默风趣的授课风格总能让 原本枯燥无味的英语变得趣味横生。
错误的教训(A lesson of my mistake)
恐怖的五分钟(Five Minutes to Fear)
传统的节日(Traditional festional)
远离交通事故(Stay Away from Traffic Accidents)
中考英语辅导:我的一个朋友(AFriendofMine)
中考英语辅导:互联网(TheInternet)
写你想感谢的人(The person you want to thank)
传统的节日(Traditional festional)
我的家乡(My Home Town)
论勇敢(On Bravery)
早起(Early Rising)
永远长不大的小天使(Little Angels Forever grow up)
中学生正确的放松方式(The proper ways for students to relax)
未来的生活(Life in the future)
我未来的打算(My future plan)
关于中学生饮食健康的
尊重家长的方案(Respecting Parents Programme)
Is Stress a Bad Thing?
对“嫦娥一号”成功发射的感想
中考英语辅导:新鲜空气(FreshAir)
国庆节作文:A Wonderful Traveling
我最要好的朋友(My Best Friend)
意外(An Accident)
做三明治的过程
如果我的梦想实现了(If my dream comes true)
女性不如男性吗?(Are Women Inferior to Men?)
对班级群体活动的看法(Comment on class group activity)
篮球是我的最爱(Basketball is My Favorite)
知识和信心通向成功之路(Knowledge and Confidence Lead to Success)
画蛇添足(Add Feet)
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