吕腾飞老师点评：Ask for leave

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　　Dear sir,

　　 Yesterday I got caught in a heavy rain on the way back home. I am sorry to tell you that I cant go to school today. I catch a serious cold ang and have a headache. My mother took me temperature finding that I have a high fever. Yesterday my mother took me to go to the hospital to see a doctor. After the regular examination , Tthe doctor gave a few tests for me. Latter, he toid told me not to be nervous and it is wasprobably not serious. But he advised me to stay in bed for days, take medicines on time and drink water as much as possible.

　　 So Im writing to you to ask for three days sick leave. I promise I will work hard and make up the missed courses after recovering. If I have anything unclear, I will ask you for help.

　　 Thousands of thanks!

　　 Yours truly

　　 Li Hua

这位同学你好。高考作文中一类文的标准除了内容要点齐全，无语法错误之外，最重要的是语言的丰富使用。你的文章在用词方面是优势，但是在句式的丰富变化方面欠缺一些。希望以后多用学过的从句和非谓语。

批改老师：吕腾飞

吕腾飞，（查看吕腾飞老师介绍） 首都师范大学英语教育专业，英语教育专业。高考专家，四年重点高中教学经验，三年培训学校教学经验，先后任教于东城区北京二中和海 淀区十一学校，对北京高中教育现状和北京高考了如指掌，专业背景下，一直致力于研究中学生学习心理和学习障碍，应用到高中教学中成效显著。