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as we know, the environment becomes more and more surprised.for example,the tress was cut down,the river was not clean and so on.what more,the air was not fresh.what should we do? first,we should grew the tress,and kept watering to let the tress grew quickly.second,dont threw the rubbish into the river,keep the river cleaning ,then,the fish will feel happy to live in the clean river.second,we should take a bus to another places,try our best to protect our home.finally,lets hurry up to take action!
修改范文如下:
As we know/As is known to all, the environment problems have become more and more serious. For example, many treeshave beencut down. The rivershave beenpolluted. Whats more, the airis far fromfresh.
What should we do with these problems? First of all, we should grow more trees. Second, we shouldnt throw the rubbish into the rivers. As a result the rivers will become clean and the fish will be happy to live there. In addition, we should take a bus to travel instead ofa car so that the air will become fresh again.
Lets hurry up to take actions right now!
批改老师:刘晓伟
刘晓伟,(查看刘晓伟老师介绍 课堂实拍) 毕业于兰州大学。提倡心态方法知识的处世哲学,主张全力以赴地学习,有的放矢地考试。对付考试一定要用最直接、最有效的方法,不 断 修炼技巧的同时加强自身的实力。在北京多所培训机构担任过英语教师,从事教学,教研,教材编写等工作,教学经验丰富。获得优秀教师称号,全国青少年英语科 技大赛考官,与他人合著《高考英语状元宝典》。
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