2003年高考上海卷优秀作文--杂而不乱归于大同

翻开试卷，看到作文题――“杂”，不觉有些想笑，还真符合我现在的心情哪，复杂、紧张却又有些兴奋，不安但带着期盼，怎一个“杂”字了得！（见笑了）于是，我静下心来，闭眼冥想从头说“杂”。

Turn over the paper and see the composition question "miscellaneous". I don't feel like laughing. It's really in line with my current mood. It's complicated, tense and excited. I'm uneasy but I'm looking forward to it! (laughs) so, I calm down, close my eyes and meditate and say "miscellaneous" from the beginning.

有些吃力地，翻开历史那沉重的书页，不时会看到“杂”的踪影。先有春秋战国群雄割据九州，而后，秦始皇结束了这一混杂的场面，统一了天下；再后来三国鼎立，均分天下，之后被魏晋取代；然后是南北朝的混战由唐结束；接着五代十国的兵荒马乱被北宋终结，历史一次又一次地，重复着由杂乱到统一的循环，仿佛这是个亘古不变的定理。而历史，在这不停转动的巨轮中，悄然已走过了漫漫千百年。

Some laboriously, turn over the heavy pages of history, and from time to time you will see the trace of "miscellaneous". First, in the spring and Autumn period and the Warring States period, the first emperor of Qin ended this mixed scene and unified the world; then, the Three Kingdoms separated the world equally and were replaced by the Wei and Jin Dynasties; then, the civil war in the southern and Northern Dynasties ended in the Tang Dynasty; then, the wars of the five and ten dynasties ended in the Northern Song Dynasty, and the history repeated the cycle from chaos to unity again and again, as if this was an eternity An old unchanging theorem. And history, in this constantly rotating wheel, has quietly gone through thousands of years.

“杂”对我们的影响却远不止历史，若有幸游一游大江南北，看一看各地的民风民俗民习民居，你便会知道“杂”字的影响力是多么非凡。就拿各地民居而言，徽州是盐商麋居之地，所以那里的建筑“曲折如才子笔”，洁白的粉墙，黝黑的屋瓦，鳞次栉比的兽形斗拱，还有高昂的墙头和参差的造型，无不透露一股“贾而好儒”的气氛；如果是去福建，闽南客家的建筑会给人以坚如磐石、团团圆圆的审美感；若是来江南的园林，在幽幽曲径，翼然亭阁之中，你不禁吟哦出“庭院深深深几许”的诗句；而要是你登上了巍峨壮美的长城，感受到的却是荡尽羁尘、豁然开朗的气势。仅是一个中国，建筑的风格就是如此迥异，气象万千。但就是这看似杂乱无章、毫不相关的构建风格，却形成了独特的中国砖木结构建筑体系，在世界建筑之林占有了重要的一席之地。于是我们从中看出了建筑艺术的开朗，将“杂”如此完美地融合在一起，其艺术的包含性可见一斑。

"Miscellaneous" has far more influence on us than history. If you have the honor to visit the whole country and see the folk customs and houses, you will know how extraordinary the influence of "miscellaneous" is. As far as the local houses are concerned, Huizhou is the place where the salt merchants live, so the buildings there are "twists and turns like talented people's pens", white walls, dark roof tiles, rows of animal shaped arches, high walls and uneven shapes, all of which reveal the atmosphere of "Jia Er Hao ru". If you go to Fujian, the Hakka buildings in Southern Fujian will give people a rock solid and round trial Aesthetic feeling: if you come to the gardens in the south of the Yangtze River, you can't help chanting the poem "the courtyard is a little deeper", but if you climb the Great Wall, you will feel the atmosphere of boundless and open-minded. Only in one China, the architectural style is so different and colorful. However, this seemingly disordered and irrelevant construction style has formed a unique Chinese brick and wood structure building system, occupying an important place in the world's architectural forest. Therefore, we can see the openness of architectural art, and the inclusion of art can be seen from the perfect integration of "miscellaneous".

我竟发现，这大千世界多的是杂乱却条理分明，不只从人文领域来看，在城市精神中“杂”也体现得如此清晰。从我身处的这座可爱的城市看，传统与洋派、时尚与怀旧，世上任何一种文化都可以在这里找到落脚点。也正是因为有了一种海纳百川、兼容包并的大气胸襟，上海杂而不乱，有条不紊，反倒散发出一股混合的迷人，让人为之陶醉。

I found that the vast world is messy but well-organized. Not only in the field of humanities, but also in the spirit of the city, "miscellaneous" is so clear. From the lovely city I live in, tradition and foreign style, fashion and nostalgia, any culture in the world can find a foothold here. It is precisely because of the magnanimity of embracing all kinds of rivers and compatible packages that Shanghai is miscellaneous, orderly and charming, which makes people intoxicated.

还想苍茫中原大地，56个民族杂居在一起，我们有一个共同的名字：中华儿女。

Also want to vast central plains, 56 ethnic groups living together, we have a common name: the Chinese people.

还想百家争鸣，三教九流，它们同被称为中华文化。

Also want to contend with a hundred schools of thought, three schools of thought, they are also known as Chinese culture.

在时间与空间的交汇处，所有的“杂”融合到了一起，不分疆界，包含于这神奇的宇宙。

At the intersection of time and space, all the "miscellaneous" are integrated, regardless of boundaries, into this magical universe.

倒是真符合这样的一个标准。“各美其美，美人之美，美美与共，天下大同。”我们提倡“杂”，因为若是没有“杂”，也就不会有“大同”。由杂到同，这是我的一点感悟。

It really meets such a standard. "The beauty of each, the beauty of the beauty, the beauty and the common, the world is the same." We advocate "miscellaneous", because if there is no "miscellaneous", there will be no "Datong". From miscellaneous to the same, this is my feeling.

（本文得分为69分）

(the score of this paper is 69 points)

简评：本文的优点，主要是站得较高，看得也远。为了论述大千世界的丰富复杂性以及“美美与共，天下大同”这一理想的正确，作者从中国历史谈到宇宙时空，从传统文化讲到时代精神，行文颇有一点大开大合的气势，立意却又是首尾一贯的，因而也就有了形散神聚的好处。

Brief comment: the advantage of this article is mainly to stand high and see far. In order to discuss the richness and complexity of the great world and the correctness of the ideal of "beauty and common, the world is in harmony", the author talks about the space-time of the universe from Chinese history, from traditional culture to the spirit of the times, and his writing is a little open and harmonious, but his intention is consistent from the beginning to the end, so it also has the benefits of form, mind and concentration.