【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导四 过渡词语

　　I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie 【写作点评】 (1)第一段中准确地使用了关系副词when引导的定语从句,一下子就抓住 了读者的注意力。 (2)第二段使用了first,second,and third来连接作者提出的这几条建议,表 达清晰,使文章前后连贯顺畅。 3 跟踪训练 (2017辽宁大连第二十高级中学期中) 假设你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末或在假 期中帮助家人做家务的一次经历。 写作要点:1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。 注意:1.词数不少于100;2.开头已给,不计入总词数;3.不可写真实姓名。 注意时态。 I am an 18-year-old middle school student.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       【范文】 I’m an 18-year-old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly,I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floor. At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and the floor shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I never felt so happy. 写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导四　过渡词语 1 过渡词语指导 一、根据过渡词本身在文章中起的作用,主要分为以下四类,即“起” “承”“转”“合”。 1.表示“起”的过渡词:用于开篇引出扩展句。如: at first,at present,currently,recently,first(ly),in general,in the beginning,to begin with,first of all,generally speaking,in the first place,to start with, presently,now等。 2.表示“承”的过渡词:用来承接上下文。如: after/after that/afterwards,by this time,after a few days,certainly,after a

　　写作指导 while,also/too,for example,for instance,for this purpose,besides/what’s more,from now on,in addition,second,in addition to...,secondly,in fact,simi- larly,in other words,in particular,in the same way,by the way,indeed,third, meanwhile,thirdly,moreover,for another,no doubt,such as,obviously,later,of course,truly,particularly等。 3.表示“转”的过渡词:用来表示不同或相反的意见。如: after all,fortunately,all the same,however,anyway,in spite of,at the same time,luckily,but,though/although,in/by contrast,on the contrary,even though, otherwise,unfortunately,yet等。 4.表示“合”的过渡词:用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。如: above all,accordingly,as a result,in sum,as has been noted,in summary,as I have said,on the whole,at last,therefore,thus,briefly,to speak frankly,by do- ing so,to sum up,eventually,finally,to conclude,in brief,in conclusion,in short,truly,in a word,so,all in all等。 如: Dear Sir or Madam, (起)Thank you for reading my letter.I am very interested in the exchange program you offered.I am writing to obtain some more detailed information about it. (起)Firstly,I am a senior three student.(承)After I graduate from high school, I’d like to apply to take part in the exchange program.(合)So I wonder what qualifications are required for applicants.Secondly,if admitted,what courses am I going to take,and do I need to buy any books ahead of time? (承)In addition,would you be so kind to introduce to me the conditions of board and lodging?I also want to know something about the fees.(承)By the way,if I need to make any other preparations,let me know,will you?

　　Thanks again for your time,and I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 二、根据过渡词本身的意思和文章连接所需要的逻辑意义,可分为以下 五类: 1.表示因果关系

　　as a result

　　He never studied hard,and as a result he failed in the last examination.

　　as a result of

　　He is late for work as a result of a traffic accident.

　　accordingly

　　He wanted to buy a radio to study English,and accordingly his mother bought one for him.

　　because(of)

　　We are delayed because of a traffic jam.

　　due to

　　His success is due to his excellent work.

　　owing to

　　Owing to his absence,our meeting is not held.

　　thanks to

　　Thanks to a good teacher,she passed the examination.

　　now that

　　Now that you have grown up,you must earn for yourself.

　　since

　　Since you are here now,you’d better give a hand.

　　in that

　　The policy is harmful in that it may encourage people to give up. so that The officer speaks at the top of his voice so that every soldier can hear him.

　　therefore

　　There is a calculating mistake there;therefore,the answer is wrong. 2.表示解释关系

　　as a matter of fact

　　I will go there this morning;as a matter of fact,I am only 10 minutes’

　　drive from you.

　　as well

　　I will go there.My friend will go with me as well.

　　frankly speaking

　　Frankly speaking,I am not very satisfied with your words.

　　in this case

　　In this case,I will go there as soon as possible. 3.表示推理关系

　　or else

　　Hurry up,or else you’ll be late.

　　otherwise

　　You must carry this passport;otherwise you will be stopped by the guard.

　　if so

　　If so,it will make a great difference. 4.表示递进关系

　　in addition

　　I need your help.In addition,I also need her support.

　　besides

　　First,we must work hard.Besides,we must work with a creative mind. moreover

　　The hat is the right size for you,and moreover,it goes well with your skin.

　　that is to say

　　The stock price is declining;that is to say,I am losing money.

　　in other words

　　I am not hungry—in other words,I really dislike the food in this canteen.

　　equally important

　　You should read more news from newspapers,and equally important,keep an eye on the news from the radio.

　　what’s more

　　It is harmful to my health,and what’s more,it is no good to my work.

　　last but not least

　　Last but not least,my thanks should go to every member of my class. 5.表示比较关系

　　equally

　　As a teacher,I should teach well,but equally,I should study well.

　　in contrast to

　　In contrast to your belief,I quite disagree with you.

　　instead If you don’t go,I’ll go instead. on the contrary

　　You think I like it.On the contrary,I dislike it.

　　in contrast

　　It is hot in the daytime,but in contrast it’s very cold at night. while We are happy in China,while most Africans live unhappily. 2 写作典例 (2017安徽) 为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO- HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常 的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下: 1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意: 1.词数120左右; 2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪 Hi Worried, I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours, Jamie 【范文】 Hi Worried, I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be

　　going wrong,so you don’t have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.Here are three useful tips: First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of let- ting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.