2016届高三（牛津版）英语一轮复习讲义 写作 第八讲 揣摩图画内涵从容掌控图画作文

　　第八讲　揣摩图画内涵从容掌控图画作文

　　(2017·高考江苏卷)请根据你对以下两幅图的理解以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题用英语写一篇作文。

　　参考词汇：banner (横幅)　stump (树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容：简要描述两幅图的内容； 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解； 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1.可参照图片适当发挥； 作文词数150 左右； 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等。Actions Speak Louder than Words

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　　1．图画中的信息是“百说不如一干”。(一般表达)The message in the pictures is“Actions speak louder than words.”(高级表达)(主语从句和同位语从句)___________________________________________答案：What

　　the

　　pictures

　　describe

　　vividly/convey；that “Actions speak louder than words.”我们的地球正受到严重的破坏。我们该怎么做是说空话还是采取切实可行的措施呢？(一般表达)Our earth is suffering severe damage.What should we do(高级表达)(不定式作状语＋高级词汇＋定语从句)Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just________________or take practical measures________the earth答案：pay lip service; to protect; which is suffering severe damage为了改善环境我们应该立即采取措施如停止砍伐树木。(一般表达)To improve the environment(高级表达)(过去分词作状语)______________________________________ _________own trees，to better the environment.

　　答案：Faced with phenomenon/the problem我们应该把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童而不是空喊口号。(一般表达)We should donate books and sports goods to children in need.We shouldn’t shout empty slogans.(高级表达)(it作形式主语＋定语从句)Instead of shouting empty slogans________________________donate books and sports goods to children________________________．答案：it is more meaningful to；who need them/needing them我们应该严格自觉遵守交通规则红灯停而不是抱怨交通拥堵。(一般表达)We should strictly and voluntarily obey traffic rules.We should stop at the red light.We shouldn’t complain about traffic jams.(高级表达)(虚拟语气＋倒装)______________________strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules and________________________just complain about traffic jams.答案：It is high time that we should; under no circumstances should we

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　　One possible version：Actions Speak Louder than Words

　　People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain，while Picture 2 shows a couple planting trees happily.

　　The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.”Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just

　　pay

　　lip

　　service

　　or

　　take

　　practical measures to

　　protect

　　it？The

　　answer

　　is definitely

　　the

　　latter. Immediate

　　action should be

　　taken, of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at

　　the

　　red

　　light

　　rather

　　than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference.

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