2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达同步训练：14

　　2017届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷14（含解析）

　　1．

　　假如你叫李华，是新高三学生，最近你收到来自美国的笔友Peter的来信，询问你新学期的打算，请你根据以下提示写一封短信给他。

　　1．新上高三既感到兴奋也紧张（略举一二说明兴奋和紧张的缘由）。

　　2．因英语成绩不够好，准备努力学习，并希望得到老师和Peter的支持。

　　3．邀请他方便的时候来中国。

　　注意：1．词数120词左右；

　　2．开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Peter,

　　Thank you for the last letter．In the letter you asked me how I plan for the new term．…………………………………………………………………………………..

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　2．照片展现了志愿者活动的一个情景。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：

　　1．简述照片内容；

　　2．谈谈你的感想；

　　3．说说你能做什么。

　　注意：

　　1．词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词。

　　2．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　Your help will make a difference!

　　Volunteers help our society in many ways．They devote their time and effort to help people in need．

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　　3．书面表达(满分30分)

　　我国使用手机上网的网民已经达到1.55亿，其中超过5000万人是19岁以下的青少年。日来，手机黄色网站“祸及”青少年学生成为社会各界高度关注的焦点，你们班同学就“”展开了一场热烈讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请介绍并阐明你自己的观点。

　　0％的同学 约60％的同学 你的看法

　　2. 方便与家长、朋友联系。

　　3. 有多种功能，使人得到放松。 1. 用手机上网浪费时间和金钱

　　2. 网络上有许多有害信息，对青少年造成不良影响。

　　3．影响生活和学习。 1. …

　　2. …

　　(至少2条)

　　注意：

　　1. 对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。

　　2. 词数左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　假设你是李华，是我校一位高二学生。最近你收到来自友好学校朋友Tom的邀请，请你下个周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中国的传统绘画。但是你和其他高二学生一样在忙于准备期末考，不得不谢绝他的邀请。请根据下面的要点给Tom用英语写一封回信。

　　要点：1. 谢绝Tom的邀请；

　　2. 说明你的理由；

　　3. 推荐你的同学Mary参加，并说明原因。

　　注意：1．词数为100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 信的开头已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）。

　　Dear Tom,

　　Thank you very much for your invitation. ________________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　5．书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是李，是的一名学生, 想要参加大厦的招聘工作，请你根据下列内容给公司经理写一份申请。

　　1. 19年月8日生于；

　　2. 年7月毕业，学习英语年；

　　3. 对英语感兴趣，尤其擅长口语和写作；

　　4. 熟练掌握电脑操作技术，会编程，打字每分钟100。

　　注意1. 词数：100字左右；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 参考词汇：编程make programs

　　Dear Manager,

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　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　One possible version

　　Dear Peter,

　　Thank you for the last letter．In the letter you asked me how I plan for the new term．Now I’d like to tell you something about it．As a new Senior 3 student, first I feel excited because now I have come to another new and challenging studying level and after a year I’ll accept the real “examination”．Maybe I’ll have access to my dream college．Meanwhile I’m a little nervous because becoming a Senior 3 student means I’m much closer to the college entrance．The examination is too important for every Chinese student．Worse still, I’m not very good at English．I fear I might fail the examination if I can’t improve it in the last year．So I’m determined to try harder at it．I hope I can get more help from the teacher as well as you．

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　2．

　　Volunteers help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.

　　The picture above illustrates a scene that can be seen in our life, where volunteers went to look after the old people. They send them not only the things the old need but also their love to those who need care most.

　　Seeing this picture, I think of the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of orphans who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help them realize that there are people who care about them.

　　Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇看图说话类作文。右边的照片展现了志愿者活动的一个情景。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1．简述照片内容；2．谈谈你的感想；3．说说你能做什么。首先要看懂图画内容，准确描述图画内容。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要谈谈自己的感想。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

　　【亮点说明】The picture above illustrates a scene that can be seen in our life, where volunteers went to look after the old people.这里含有两个定语从句；They send them not only the things the old need but also their love to those who need care most.这里含有一个定语从句；Seeing this picture, I think of the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of orphans who need better care. 这里含有一个定语从句。

　　考点：看图说话类书面表达

　　3．Recently our class has held a heated discussion about whether it’s good for teenagers to surf the Internet through mobile phones. Opinions are divided on this matter.

　　About 40% of the students support it. They think by surfing the Internet through mobile phones, they can know about the latest information anytime and anywhere they like, which will broaden their views. Moreover, it’s convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends. At the same time, it provides many functions, thus making them relaxed.

　　However, about 60% of the students hold the opposite opinion, arguing that it’s a waste of time and money to play games and chat online through mobile phones. Worse still, There is a lot of harmful information online, which surely has a bad influence on teenagers. Being addicted to online games does great harm to their life as well as their studies.

　　【解析】略

　　4．

　　Dear Tom,

　　Thank you very much for your invitation.

　　I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.

　　I strongly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

　　Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】本文是考生非常熟悉的书信，首先要审好题，本文属于半开放性的作文，要点给的很模糊，要求考生有较多的个人发挥。在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇如recommend，inconvenience等。同时也要注意使用合适的连接词，和高级句式如定语从句，状语从句，强调句等等，让文章更有层次。

　　5．

　　Dear Manager,

　　I am a student from He Nan University. I was born on May 8 in 1987 and I will graduate in July next year. I have studied English hard for four years because I am really interested in and major in it. What’s more, I am especially good at spoken English and written English. Operating the personal computer is also one of my advantages. Not only can I make programs for it by myself but also do well in typing, for my typing speed is 100 words per minute.

　　If I am accepted, I will cherish the opportunity and work hard to be a good employee.

　　I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】略