2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达同步训练：12

　　2017届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷12（含解析）

　　1．

　　写作（满分25分）

　　假设你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Michael 十年前来过你的家乡。现在远方的他写信给你想了解你们家乡的变化。请根据以下提示给Michael 回一封电子邮件。

　　过去 生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系简单、慢。

　　现在 生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住的舒适,手机普及。

　　要求：1．围绕以上内容进行合理表述；

　　2．所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；

　　3．词数80词左右, 开头语已给出 （不计入词数）。

　　Dear Michael,

　　You want to learn the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago．

　　In the past, ______________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________Sincerely Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2．

　　27

　　（2010·广东梅州市梅州中学高三中段考试）

　　假设你是小明，你家打算改善住房条件.现在有两套房子供选择，一套是位于商业区的现代公寓楼，一套是郊区的传统式房屋。家里人对购买哪套更好持不同的观点。请你根据下面所给的内容，用英语给你的朋友Paul写一封信，征求他的意见。

　　写作内容:

　　现代公寓楼宽敞明亮，购物上学方便；

　　传统式房屋安静，空气清新，邻里之间交往多，氛围和谐。

　　写作要求:

　　必须使用5个句子表达全部内容；

　　将5个句子组成连贯的短文；

　　信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总句数。

　　参考词汇： suburbs

　　郊区

　　harmonious

　　和谐的

　　Dear Paul,

　　Recently my family is planning to improve our housing conditions.

　　What’s your opinion?

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Xiao Ming

　　读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　In the past, the expression "children should be seen and not heard" summed up the attitude of parents to their children. Children were expected to be disciplined, well-behaved and the parents ruled the home. But today parents seem to do everything for their children and control all aspects of their lives. Some call this overparenting. Parents take charge of everything: from what pre-school their kids attend to the pastimes they take up. Parents feel they must protect their children to increase their chances for success. As a result children do less than ever before.

　　There are two reasons for overparenting. First, people now have fewer children than in years past so they can give each one more attention. Secondly, parents feel the future of their family is now dependent on only one child, so they must do as much as possible to help their child succeed.

　　But overparenting has negative consequences. Children are less independent now and are protected from the hardships and failures that teach them determination and give them the satisfaction of accomplishment. Also the pressure kids feel to be successful means they experience more anxiety and depression than ever before.

　　〔写作内容〕

　　1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

　　2.然后以约120个词表达你对“父母过度照顾子女”这一现象的观点。内容包括：

　　(1)以你自己或他人成长的某次经历，说明父母过度照顾对子女的影响；

　　(2)表达你在此方面对父母的希望或建议。

　　［写作要求］

　　1.在作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　［评分标准］

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　4．你的美国朋友William下个月即将来北京。请根据以下提示给他写信，告知他到达当日的安排。

　　你去机场接机。

　　送他去酒店。

　　晚上欢迎他来你家共进晚餐。

　　注意：1. 词数不少于50。

　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3. 邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear William,

　　______________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________

　　Yours Joe

　　5．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，高中毕业后想到美国弗吉尼亚大学(University of Virginia)计算机专业深造，请根据以下提示用英语写一封入学申请：

　　1．性别，年龄，毕业学校；2．学习情况及特长；

　　3．申请入学的理由；

　　4．联系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com

　　注意：1．词数：120～1502．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I look forward to your prompt reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　Dear Michael,

　　You want to know the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken placed since 60 years ago．

　　In the past, the living conditions were very poor．There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow．Usually, a big family was crowded into a small, dark house．Most families couldn’t get enough food．The communications were simple and slow．People kept in touch with others far away mainly by letter or telegram．

　　Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recently years．The living conditions are much better and more comfortable．The roads are wide．Some people have their own cars．Most of the people have lived in big new houses．Quite a few adults have mobile phones．Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better．

　　Sincerely Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2．

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Paul,

　　Recently my family are planning to improve our housing conditions. We have different ideas about whether we should buy an old-style house in the suburbs or a flat in the downtown. Some suggest we buy a modern flat because it’s big and bright, and it’s conveniently located close to shops and schools.

　　However, the others are in favor of the old-style house. They consider the air is fresh and it’s peaceful to live in the suburbs. The most important thing is that neighbours have more chances to communicate with each other to make a harmonious living atmosphere.

　　What’s your opinion?

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Xiao Ming

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　Because parents are having fewer children, they increasingly feel the need to control the lives of those children. As a result, many children are becoming less independent, determined and ambitious than in the past.

　　Parents today discourage their children from doing housework, extracurricular activities and socializing because they fear it will interrupt their education. For example, when I was younger I wanted to learn the guitar but my parent wouldn’t allow me because they believed it would distract me from my studies. They are happy as long as I perform well in my exams but don’t seem concerned about how I develop as a person.

　　To some extend, I understand parents’ concerns, but I think they should love their children for who they are, not what they want them to be. We deserve the chance to chase our own dreams and learn on our own. Even if we fail, we can learn from those failures.

　　【解析】

　　4．

　　Dear William,

　　I’m so happy that you’re coming to Beijing next month. I’ll go to the airport to meet you on the day you arrive. After that, I’ll send you to the hotel. You can have a rest there after the long flight. My parents and I will be very happy if you can come over to our house for dinner that evening.

　　It’s a long time since we last met. I can’t wait to see you!

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

　　【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了好的词组和句子： have a rest休息一下，come over to顺便来访，

　　I’m so happy that you’re coming to Beijing next month.这句话用了so…that句型，I’ll go to the airport to meet you on the day you arrive.这句话用了定语从句，It’s a long time since we last met.这句话用了固定句型。

　　考点：考查提纲类书面表达

　　5．

　　Dear Sir or Madam.

　　I’m writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university.

　　First, please allow me to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June. I’m an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects, in particular Internet, Technology and English. This is the reason why I want to major in Computer Science in an English speaking country. I’m also good at computer program design and basketball.

　　I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoy a good reputation all around the world. It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

　　My e-mail address is lihua93@ yahoo.com, and I’ll appreciate it very much if I can receive your reply!

　　Sincerely yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】本文是一封申请书，重点是介绍自己的相关情况，性别，年龄，毕业学校学习情况及特长；申请入学的理由