2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达同步训练：11

　　2017届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷11（含解析）

　　1．书面表达（满分25分）

　　假如你叫李华，你和几位英语爱好者在互联网上建了一个叫 easyenglish 的网站。请用英语写一篇100字的短文向你校学生介绍这个网站。要点如下；

　　1 目的：培养学习兴趣，使学英语变得更加轻松。

　　2 内容：1）丰富的英语材料：英语习题、外国文化、英语小故事等；

　　2）网络英语聊天；

　　3）展示英语习作，交流学习体会。

　　注意：1 短文必须包括以上要点，可适当添加细节。

　　2 开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear fellow students,

　　I'd like to introduce you to a new website -- easyenglish.com.

　　We1come to surf this website and be a member of it!

　　2． 假如你是高三学生李华，今年高考英语学科阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示写信向你的前外教Mr．Johnson求助：

　　1．英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；

　　2．希望得到他的指导和帮助。

　　注意：1．词数：l20—l50，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Mr．Johnson，

　　Yours，

　　请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

　　注意：①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　词数120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　4．Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

　　1. 建设绿色校园很重要；

　　2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境，还包括校园师生保护环境的文化素养……；

　　3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

　　5．2017年秋，新生入学伊始，北京、上海等地多所学校开出“苹果班”教程，学生上课时使用iPad回答问题，放学后家庭作业也需要用iPad来完成。对此不少家长产生疑虑，认为加重了经济负担；孩子也可能沉迷游戏、影响学习。但也有不少家长反映，用高科技教学，不仅能提高孩子的兴趣，更能减少“拉箱书包”给孩子造成的负担。请围绕这个话题写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

　　注意：词数为100词左右。

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　Dear fellow students,

　　I’d like to introduce you to a new website — easyenglish.com.

　　The purpose of setting up such a website is to develop your interest of learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for us students. A wide variety of English materials are available in this website, such as English exercises, foreign cultures, English short stories, etc. And you can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your oral and written English. Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and exchange your English learning experiences with others, this website is your best choice. Meanwhile, your English can get improved by being corrected by others.

　　Welcome to surf this website and be a member of it!

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　Dear Mr. Johnson,

　　How are things going with you?

　　I’m writing to ask for your help. As you know, I’m weak in English reading comprehension. Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended up in failure, which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higher percentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing near, I feel more and more stressed and worried. If I didn’t take effective measures, I wouldn’t be able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream.

　　I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on how to improve my reading ability effectively and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

　　【亮点说明】

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　3．

　　One possible version

　　There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win. If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.

　　Mayun will never forget his experience. Twenty years ago, when he tried to find a job, he found the door to success closed before him one after another, just because of his bad-looking appearance. However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.

　　In conclusion, failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner, so never give up and keep on going until you win.

　　(125 words)

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：成功者不是从不失败，而是从不放弃

　　亮点说明：

　　范文使用了较多的语法知识：常用句型There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win；if条件从句If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.；让步状语从句However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.；短语on the way to do sth 等，显示了较高的运用英语语法知识的能力；范文注意使用However, From then on, From this story等衔接前后句和上下文，做到了语意连贯、衔接紧凑；

　　范文使用了一些固定短语：desire to do，tend to，in face of failure，bad-looking appearance，stuck to his dream，In conclusion等，丰富了作文的内容。

　　考点：材料类作文

　　4．

　　Creating a Green Campus

　　Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in schools, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.

　　The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind. Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and “green campus” will definitely have a good effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation. What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for us students to solve.

　　To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste. Last but not the least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：，Creating a Green Campus的话题，文字提示只有部分内容，需要我们做适当的发挥，可以从我们自己的做法：如不乱扔垃圾，节约等方面着手。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型文章更有档次。

　　5．

　　Rencently, iPad are being used for teaching in many schools in Beijing and Shanghai. People have different opinions on it.

　　Many people are for the new measure because they think that iPads are light to carry and convenient to use. The students today are familiar with electronic products, which can help to arouse their interest in learning.

　　However, others argue that reading on the screen is harmful to students’ eyes in the long run. They may also lose their ability to write by pressing the keys instead of writing with pens.

　　In my view, students should always write with pens. Meanwhile, electronic products can be used in class to make learning more interesting.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力