2017届高考英语一轮循环写作周周练：第14周 字顺意畅的衔接（新人教版含解析）

　　第十四周　字顺意畅的衔接

　　衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语归纳如下：

　　一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语

　　above all， to begin/start with， today， now， nowadays， at present， currently， recently， generally speaking， according to， with the development of ...等。

　　①Now, I’d like to share my experience with you.(2015·湖南高考满分作文)

　　现在，我想与你们分享一下我的经验。

　　②To start with, I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years.(2015·四川高考满分作文)

　　首先，我学说普通话已经17年了。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。

　　With_the_development_of the Internet, computers play an important role in people’s life.

　　2．总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。

　　Generally_speaking,_the more you practise, the more skillfully you can write in English.

　　二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语

　　firstly， first of all， to begin/start with， then， later， in the end， finally， at last， after that， afterwards， since then， immediately， suddenly， meanwhile等。

　　①Firstly, I have always been interested in reading books. Secondly, I’d like to share my books with others as well.(2015·重庆高考满分作文)

　　首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。

　　②Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. (2017·安徽高考书面表达)

　　第二，到户外和朋友一起做做体育锻炼是一种有效的排解生气的方式。

　　[即时演练]　完成片段

　　首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。

　　Firstly,_I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After_that,_I swept and mopped the floors.(2017·陕西高考书面表达)

　　三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语

　　and， or， also， as well as， neither ... nor ...， not only ... but also ...， either ... or ...， not ... but ...等。

　　①She finally earned respect of them, who eventually became confident as well as well­behaved.(2015·广东高考满分作文)

　　她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。

　　②I think we will have a good time there and I will send your photos taken there.(2017·山东高考满分作文)

　　我想我们会玩得很愉快，而且我将会把在那里拍的你的照片送给你。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．观光最好要么乘坐游览巴士，要么骑自行车。

　　Sightseeing is best done either_by_tour_buses_or_by_bicycles.

　　2．游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。

　　Swimming not_only benefits our health, but_also helps us have a strong will.

　　四、表示转折关系的过渡性词语

　　but， yet， however， while， otherwise， on the contrary， though， although， even if/though， despite， in spite of， regardless of等。

　　Otherwise we’ll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.(2017·重庆高考写作)

　　否则的话，我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．然而，使你最惊讶的是下述新的功能。

　　However,_what amazes you most is the following new function.(2017·湖南高考书面表达)

　　2．相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。

　　On_the_contrary,_smart phones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.(2017·重庆高考写作)

　　五、表示因果关系的过渡性词语

　　because， as， since， for， thanks to， due to， as a result of， so， therefore， as a result/consequence等。

　　Thanks to the assistance of the local media, he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries, with 17 males and 15 females. (2017·广东高考满分作文)

　　多亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人，其中17对男性15对女性。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．由于他的粗心大意，整个工程被迫推迟至少一个月。

　　As_a_result_of his carelessness, the whole project had to be put off at least one month.

　　2．多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。

　　Thanks_to the doctor’s timely treatment, he was saved.

　　六、表示递进关系的过渡性词语

　　what's more， furthermore， moreover， besides， what's worse， still less， to make matters worse，

　　worse still， on the one hand ... on the other hand ...， for one thing ... for another thing ...等。

　　What’s more, I’m outgoing and warm­hearted.(2015·陕西高考满分作文)

　　另外，我性格外向且待人热心。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．一方面，周末他们需要好好休息；另一方面，他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。

　　On_(the)_one_hand,_they should have a good rest on weekends. On_the_other_(hand),_they should make every effort to review what they have learned.

　　2．更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来需要的交际技能。

　　Worse_still/To_make_matters_worse,_if we spend too much time on phones, we will lose the communication skills we need in the future. (2017·重庆高考满分作文)

　　七、表示列举事实的过渡性词语

　　such as， for example/instance， take ... for example， that is to say， as follows， in other words等。

　　The plan for the day is as follows: Firstly, it’s a custom to have dumplings on that day, so we’ll make delicious dumplings with our own hands rather than buy some for them.(2015·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)

　　这天的计划如下：首先，在那天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．我们有很多学科，例如汉语、数学、英语、音乐、艺术等。

　　We have many subjects, such_as Chinese, math, English, music, art and so on.(2017·天津高考满分作文)

　　2．也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。

　　That_is_to_say,_if you want to succeed, you have to believe in yourself.

　　八、表示观点的过渡性词语

　　in my opinion， in my view， from my point of view， as far as I am concerned， as for me， personally等。

　　①Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals.(2017·江西高考书面表达)

　　就个人而言，我过去经常尝试有效的方法以便达到我的学业目标。

　　②As far as I am concerned, only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually. (2017·四川高考满分作文)

　　在我看来，你只有在平时努力学习才能最终成功。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．按照我的观点，我们能够互相共享信息，以便更好地相互理解。

　　In_my_opinion,_we can share information with each other to make a better understanding.(2017·天津高考满分作文)

　　2．对我来说，我曾经收到的最珍贵的礼物是一本相册。

　　As_for_me,_the most valuable gift I’ve ever received is a photo album.(2017·重庆高考满分作文)

　　九、表示总结的过渡性词语

　　in short， in brief， in conclusion， in a/one word， to sum up， all in all， on the whole， in general等。

　　①In a word, if we had such a magic watch, our life would become more convenient.(2017·湖南高考满分作文)

　　总之，如果我们能有这么一块有魔力的手表，我们的生活将会更加方便。

　　②All in all, traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.

　　总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的选择。

　　[即时演练]　补全句子

　　1．总之，一个好市民应该遵守交通规则。

　　In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_short/In_brief/To_sum_up,_a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.

　　2．总的来说，我发现自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。

　　On_the_whole/In_general,_I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.

　　[综合演练提能]

　　Ⅰ.用过渡词汇补全句子

　　1．First_of_all/To_begin_with (首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.

　　2．Besides/In_addition/What’s_more/Moreover (况且), listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.

　　3．I lost my way in the forest and to_make_matters_worse/worse_still (更糟的是), it became dark.

　　4．Therefore_(因此), I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.

　　5．In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_short/In_brief (总之), we should take effective measures to protect our environment.

　　Ⅱ.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡性词语填空

　　above all， besides， meanwhile， for one thing， for another thing， personally， in a word， recently

　　①Recently,_it has been a great public concern that the students lack self­protection awareness.

　　There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all. ②For_one_thing,_security comes first. Without security, we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents’ expectations. ③For_another_thing,_protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students, which is associated with the happiness of every family. ④Meanwhile,_it also helps to build a more harmonious society.

　　⑤Personally,_in order to protect us students, ⑥above_all,_we should strengthen our security awareness. ⑦Besides,_when accidents occur, we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also plays a leading role in protecting students. ⑧In_a_word,_only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.

　　第四步为形体规范立纲(用时4周)

　　英语作文主要有提纲、(半)开放、图表和图画四种类型。从近几年高考来看，主要以提纲作文为主。这四种作文类型各有特点，为让考生掌握不同文体的写作技巧和结构范式，本部分采用临摹满分作文的编排模式，让考生在动手动脑中感悟满分作文的组织架构和写作技巧，把作文写得规范合体、像模像样。