2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：28（含解析）

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　　人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以此为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。

　　独立完成：自行安排，自己解决问题：

　　合作完成：一起讨论，相互学习：

　　我喜欢的方式及理由：

　　写作要求：

　　必须使用5个句子表达全部所给内容：

　　将5个句子组成连贯的短文：

　　开头已经给出但不计入总词数：

　　There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. 。。。

　　2．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　The Nigerian postal service has witnessed a reduction in the number of letters sent, especially by individuals, due to the alternatives of email and text.

　　“People prefer these over letters, because of the speed, although letters serve many purposes, other than conveying of messages", said Barry Varley Tipton, principal of Cherry Field College.

　　But some people think that the vanishing(逐渐消失的) art of letter writing has grave (严重的) consequences for students, teachers, the economy, society and the beauty of reading from loved ones, because letters in those days usually had a variety of styles .

　　A lover of letters writing, Hajiya Aisha refers to the occasions she has seen people enraged, because their connections at a cyber cafe took 56 seconds rather than the usual 36 hours. She says, “Although letters are slow, waiting for something good is not wholly a bad thing. Nothing beats a hand written letter.”

　　"When I was a graduate studying overseas twenty five years ago, my mother wrote to me daily. It was wonderful to receive those letters. They often said nothing more than everyone was thinking of me. I continue this tradition with several friends who are scattered worldwide. Hand written letters show the love that we have for family and friends. Email cannot replace the smile of actually getting the letter. The warm, sincere thank- you note, or the sweetly scented love letter we usually received and sent in those days is irreplaceable" she said.

　　Will electronic age stamps replace letters? Hopefully not, since it takes with it a culture rich in colour, history, and communication. Letters, like bits of ourselves, deserve to be stored away for future readers, giving them insight into details as small as the price and pattern of stamps, and as great as personal insights exchanged long ago.

　　【写作内容】

　　1. 以约30词概括以上短文的主要内容：

　　2. 然后以约120个词以“Will written letters die out ?”为主题写一篇短文，并包括如下要点：

　　(1)有些人认为用手机收发短信和用因特网收发邮件更加方便快捷，写信很费时间

　　(2)有些人喜欢和朋友或家人写信

　　(3)你的观点

　　【写作要求】

　　1. 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用阅读材料中的句子

　　2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确、语言规范、内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　(请在答题纸上作答)

　　3．最近，你校成立了一个心理咨询室，取名为“心灵的港湾(Harbor For Your Soul)”。该咨询室配有一名心理咨询师，旨在为全校学生提供专业的心理咨询服务。请你根据以下提示，为校英语墙报写一篇120词左右的报道。

　　名称 心灵的港湾(Harbor For Your Soul)

　　成立时间 上周三

　　地点 图书楼2楼

　　开放时间 每周一、二、四下午5:00-6:00

　　原因 目前高中生的学习负担越来越重，心理问题日益突出

　　目的 提供心理指导，缓解心理压力，促进身心健康发展

　　你的看法 ？

　　参考词汇：psychological counseling room

　　心理咨询室

　　psychologist 心理咨询师

　　4．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.

　　注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和班级名称；

　　4. 词数为120左右。

　　你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。

　　disposable chopsticks

　　注意：1．词数100个左右，开头语已为你写好；

　　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　What Can I Do for Our Environment？

　　Everyone can do something for our environment.

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　　参考答案

　　1．

　　There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.

　　People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.

　　Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.

　　It’s true that many people find it easy to send emails and text messages and often avoid writing letters completely. However, I don’t agree that written letters will gradually disappear.

　　First of all, it seems to me that letters written by people include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. For instance, using the Internet my sister still likes to receive ordinary letters by post, because they help her to feel a close bond with people living far away.

　　Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to be substitute for letters.

　　In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.

　　Possible version II

　　Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.

　　There is no doubt that with the help of the Internet and cell phones, people find it easy and convenient to communicate with others. Compared with them, writing letters seems to be a waste of time.

　　On the other hand, however, some people do enjoy receiving letters from friends and families, and meanwhile, they prefer to write letters to keep in touch with them rather than send them emails or text them messages.

　　As far as I am concerned, letters written by people will never disappear. Firstly, it seems to me that they include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to replace letters.

　　In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.

　　【解析】略

　　3．With more and more students feeling stressed out, a psychological counseling room, named “Harbor For Your Soul” was opened in our school last Wednesday. It is on the second floor of the Library Building, open from 5:00 pm to 6:00 pm every Monday, Tuesday and Thursday afternoon.

　　A psychologist is on duty at the room and he will provide psychological guidance for students and help resolve their mental health issues and concerns.

　　As its name suggests, “Harbor For Your Soul” will become a place of peace for our souls.

　　There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查表格类作文的写作。介绍学校心理咨询室根据用英语写一份报告There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.用的就是同位语从句和固定句式，还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来，如：for one thing,for another thing;what’s more等

　　4．

　　The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.

　　However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.

　　Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：lie in 在于， in the process of 在…过程中，dreamed of梦想，stick to坚持，make it成功， Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 这句话用了定语从句， Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 这句话用了主语从句，However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 这句话用了表语从句， Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.这句话用了让步状语从句。总之，范文使用大量高中教材中出现的高级短语和句型，考生应该能做到学以致用。

　　考点：考查开放式作文

　　5．What Can I Do for Our Environment？

　　Everyone can do something for our environment.

　　For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example，if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening，I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests，I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.

　　I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，做题时：1. 认真读图，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。6. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，