2017届高考英语一轮复习写作辅导课件：第8讲《完美衔接过度，编织流畅作文》（全国通用）

　　答案：1.In conclusion，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. 2．In a word，changes in our life in the past thirty years have brought us convenience

　　and comfort.

　　Ⅱ.阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空 second，as a result，despite，on (the) one hand，what's worse，in a word，on the other (hand) As a new way of shopping，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

　　________________，online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.Instead of searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like.____________，it is much faster for us to do shopping.We don't have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. ________________，online shopping also has many disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are.________________，we can be cheated easily.________________ we cannot see the things in detail. ________________，__________ the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it. 答案：On (the) one hand；Second；On the other hand；As a result；What's worse；In a word；despite 走向高考 · 英语 路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索 人教版(课标卷地区) · 高考总复习

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　　第三部分 第八讲　完美衔接过度， 编织流畅作文 第二部分

　　连接(过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：

　　一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above all，first of all，to begin with，according to，as you know/as is known，as is shown in等。 According to a research，the total number is reduced to less than 1,000 now. 按照调查结果，现在总数已减少到不足1, 000只。 As we all know，good learning habits contribute to efficient study. 我们大家都知道，好的学习习惯可以提高学习效率。 翻译句子 1．首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．正如图画所示，树被大风刮倒了，而小草依然在那里。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.First of all，I think it

　　important to

　　make

　　more friends abroad. 2．As is shown in the picture，a tree is knocked down by the strong wind，while the

　　grass stays as it is.

　　二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 First(ly)，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。 Meanwhile，we all enjoyed the beauty of nature. 同时，我们都欣赏了大自然的美丽。

　　Firstly，I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept and mopped the floors. 首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，接着我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，然后我扫地、拖地。 翻译短文 上周我得了重感冒，首先是流鼻涕，但我并未当回事，然后开始咳嗽，后来感到发烧而且没力气，最后我被送进医院，不得不在床上躺了三天。 _______________________________________________ 答案：I had a bad cold last week.First，I had a running nose，but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough.After that，I had a fever and felt weak.Finally，I was sent to

　　hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. 三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and，or，also，as well as，neither...nor...，not only...but also...，either...or...，not...but...等。 I think we will have a good time there and I will send your photos taken there. 我想我们会玩得很愉快，而且我将会把在那里拍的你的照片送给你。 Also，do let me know if you need more information. 如果你需要其他的消息，也一定要告诉我。 翻译句子 1．努力学习，你就会考上重点大学。 _________________________________________________ 2．游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university. 2．Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will. 四、表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary等。 However，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser. 然而，直到比赛结束我们才意识到我们输了。 On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth，so they are eager to experience the future life on the Mars. 相反，这些志愿者说，他们厌倦了地球上的生活，因此他们渴望体验未来火星上的生活。 翻译句子 1．然而在我们学校，情况却大不一样。 _________________________________________________ 2．但遗憾的是我只考虑自己的事情，没有考虑父母的想法。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.In our school，however，things are quite different. 2．But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents. 五、表示因果关系的过渡性词语 because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。 Therefore，there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs. 因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。 As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. 结果，孩子们变得太依赖于父母，以至于他们没有独立的思想和创造性的想法。 翻译句子 1．多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。 _________________________________________________ 2．因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.Thanks to the doctor's timely treatment，he was saved. 2．Therefore，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.

　　六、表示条件关系的过渡性词语 if，unless，in case (of)，as/so long as，on condition that等。 I would be very grateful if you can meet him at the airport. 如果你能到机场接他，我将不胜感激。 As long as we stick to our dreams，we will become a winner sooner or later. 只要我们坚持梦想，我们迟早会成为赢家。 翻译句子 1．只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.As long as you don't lose heart，you're sure to succeed. 2．If we neglect our future，we'll end up in failure as what happens to the man in

　　the picture.

　　七、表示递进关系的过渡性词语 what's more，furthermore，moreover，besides，what's worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on (the) one hand...on the other (hand)...，for one thing...for another....等。 Many of them can hardly look after themselves，still less manage their own life. 他们很多人几乎不能照顾自己，更别说经营他们自己的人生。

　　On one hand，I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents，and on the other hand，I can gain some experience from it，which will do good to my future life. 一方面，我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母，另一方面，我能从中获得一些经验，这会对我将来的生活有益。 翻译句子 1．我在森林里迷了路，更糟糕的是，天开始变黑了。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．一方面，周末他们需要好好休息；另一方面，他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse，it became dark. 2．On (the) one hand，they should have a good rest on weekends.On the other (hand)，they should make every effort to review what they have learned. 八、表示让步关系的过渡性词语 though，although，as，even if/though，who/what/when/ wherever，no matter who/what/when/where等。 Tired as I was，I never felt so happy. 尽管我很累，但我感到非常高兴。 No matter how hard the difficulties and obstacles they face are，they work all day long on the street without any complaint. 无论他们面对的困难和障碍有多么艰难，他们从早干到晚，从不抱怨。 翻译句子 1．尽管他们做了很大努力，却没法让她改变主意。 _________________________________________________ 2．不管他多忙，他总是乐意帮助别人。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.Although they tried hard/Hard as they tried，they couldn't make her change her mind. 2．No matter how busy he is，he is always ready to help others. 九、表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such as，for example/instance，take...for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。 They are of different shapes，such as diamonds，butterflies，flowers and birds. 它们形状各异，诸如像钻石、蝴蝶、花、鸟。 On one hand，I will organize some English activities，for example，to hold English debates or English speech contests so as to help us students arouse their interest in English. 一方面，我会组织一些英语活动，例如举办英语辩论赛或英语演讲比赛，目的是帮助我们学生提高英语方面的兴趣。 翻译句子 1．就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 _________________________________________________ 2．也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.Take Beijing for example，it is one of the oldest cities in the world. 2．That is to say，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in yourself.

　　十、表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinion，in my view，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally，I think...等。 As far as I am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity. 以我看来，他们代表爱、友谊和团结。 翻译句子 1．就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。 _________________________________________________ 2．按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.As far as I am concerned，I love wealth，but I value health more. 2．In my opinion，people shall not smoke in public places. 十一、表示总结的过渡性词语 in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general，generally speaking等。 In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because it's the mother of success. 总之，成功很重要，失败也很重要，因为它是成功之母。 All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. 总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的方式。 Ⅰ.翻译句子 1．总之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．总之，过去30年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________