浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（76）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

　　My little cousin is greatly interested on science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn’t want to give up. She said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, so they didn’t give up.” My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he finally succeeded in finish it.

　　第二节：书面表达（30分）

　　留意一下我们的周边，可以发现陪读现象已蔚然成风。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：

　　简要描述陪读现象；

　　2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）；

　　3．发表你对此的看法。

　　注意：词数100—120词。Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School

　　In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.

　　改错（每题1分，满分10分）

　　1.on science→ in science 2. sometime →sometimes 3. be a great scientist

　　4. hurts his thumb →hurt his thumb 5. sadly→ sad 6. stop from doing →stop doing

　　7. She said→ He said 8. so they didn’t give up →but (and) they didn’t give up 9. finish the experiments→ finish the experiment 10. in finish→in finishing

　　作文(参考例文)（满分30分）

　　Should Our Parents Accompany Us In Studying at School

　　In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.

　　These parents are willing to leave their hometown, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. Parents consider it necessary to offering a better living condition to their children. Meanwhile, it enables them to keep track of their children’s academic performance.

　　Nevertheless, what they have ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent. Thus, they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.

　　Trust leads to independence. So it seems to me parents should create room for children’s growth and study in order to ensure their overall development. Ks5u