2016届广东省高考英语二轮原创复习课件：基础写作

　　建议倡议 晨读背诵 相关短语

　　1. stop littering around停止乱扔垃圾 2. have the responsibility to do sth. 有责任

　　做某事 3. log onto the website of登录……的网站 4. gain more knowledge获得更多知识(不用

　　learn) 5. enrich your mind丰富你的头脑

　　6. obey the rules of the school遵守学校的

　　规章制度 7. don’t say dirty words不讲脏话 8. have the chance to do sth. 有机会做某事 9. cover topics like…涵盖的主题有…… 10. arouse one’s interest 激发某人的兴趣 11. get involved in 参与;涉及 12. leave a deep impression on 给……留下深

　　刻的印象 13. make some suggestions 提一些建议 14. protect our environment 保护我们的环境 15. the environmental pollution 环境污染

　　16. be of great benefit to… 对……大有好处 17. care for others关爱他人 18. get well-prepared (for)(为……)做好充分

　　的准备 19. make a plan制订计划 20. the coming speech contest 即将到来的演

　　讲比赛 21. be well-received 广受欢迎 22. take my suggestion into consideration

　　考虑我的建议 23. create a better environment创造一个

　　更好的环境 24. as a result of the fact that之所以做某

　　事是基于…… 相关句式

　　1. 其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。 The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. 2. 我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。 The reason why I’m late is that I missed the bus.

　　3. 我喜欢它，主要有两个原因。 I like it very much mainly for two reasons.

　　4. 在我看来，有三个原因。 In my opinion， there are three reasons for this. 5. 我的观点是基于以下理由。 My views are based on the following reasons.

　　6. 其理由如下。 The reasons for this are as follows.

　　7. 因此，我建议你接受你朋友的建议。 So I suggest that you take your friends advice. 8. 这里我有几条建议。 Here I have some suggestions.

　　9. 如果你能分担更多的家务，如扫地、洗衣、做饭，那就更好了。 It would be better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning, washing and cooking. 技巧点拨

　　1. 写建议倡议时，应开门见山指出写作目的， 陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about…/You have asked me for my advice on…and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me, I’d like to make some suggestions. I feel that it would be beneficial if… / I would like to suggest that…(建议信)等。另外，考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子If I were you,

　　I would…也会让文章增色不少。或In order to…,

　　I am going to make the following suggestions(倡议书)。 2. 使用advise， suggest， suggestion等时，要考虑虚拟语气的使用。

　　3. 建议信属于应用文，写作时一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。 典型例题

　　倡议目的：为鼓励同学们保持身体健康，学习好，生活愉快。 倡议内容：⑴ 一日三餐，早、中、晚按时适量；

　　⑵ 经常换食谱，饮食多样化有益健康；

　　⑶ 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃热量过高的食物，以增强体质，预防疾病；

　　⑷ 不吃过期或有毒的食品，以免损害健康，甚至危及生命。 ［写作内容］ 假设你是高三⑹ 班的一名学生李华，请写一篇倡议书，呼吁全体师生进行健康饮食，内容包括： Hello everyone,

　　I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. In order to enable all of us to keep fit, study well and lead a happy life, I am going to make the following suggestions.

　　First of all, we should have three meals every day, including breakfast, lunch and supper on time and in appropriate amount. Then we need to change our diet list constantly, since eating various kinds of food will do good to our health.

　　What is more, to prevent us from becoming weak and falling ill easily for lack of necessary nutrition, it is necessary

　　for us to eat more nutritious fruits and vegetables and less food with too many calories. Last but not least, we should never eat out-of-date or poisonous foods, for they are harmful to our health, or more seriously, some of them can be fatal.

　　课堂练习

　　Dear Xiaoming,

　　You told me that you are excited and nervous about the coming college life and I am glad to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. First of all, you’d better get familiar with the life on campus ahead of time by logging on the website of the university and asking senior schoolmates for help. Besides, you should read more books to gain more knowledge and enrich your mind.

　　In addition, it would be a good idea if you can make a plan about your university life and pay a visit to the campus to learn more about the surroundings. Get well prepared and wish you a great time in your new school!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua 亮点点击:

　　表达建议, 灵活运用了You should do, You had better do… It would be a good idea if…等; 另外, 巧用了起连接作用的表达,

　　如first of all, besides, in addition等，使句与 句之间连接得更自然。

　　课外作业

　　Hello everyone,

　　I am Li Hua from the Students’ Union and I am calling on all of you to take part in the “Let’s Create a More Civilized Campus”. The activity is conducted to create a better learning and living environment, as a result of the fact that many of us leave litter everywhere, and damage the flowers, grass and trees from time to time.

　　I suggest that everyone should stop littering around to keep our campus clean as well as take good care of the green plants. Besides, we should obey the rules of the school, not being late for school or leaving earlier. What’s more important, we are supposed to stop saying dirty words or telling lies, and care for other classmates to make the school full of love.

　　I believe everyone, as a member of our school, should have the responsibility to take part in the activity to create a more civilized campus.

　　亮点点击：本文难度在于整合信息，范文通过合理的整合，即倡议名称和目的各为一句，然后用3句话覆盖5个倡议内容。另外，灵活使用了表建议的句型be supposed

　　to do sth和suggest that sb. should do sth等。

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