2016届广东省高考英语二轮原创复习课件：基础写作

　　经历感受

　　晨读背诵

　　相关短语

　　1. organize an activity 组织活动

　　2. meet/gather at the school gate在校门口集合 3. sing the national song唱国歌

　　4. take part in the speech contest参加演讲比赛 5. surf the Internet上网搜索

　　6. have a chat with sb.和某人聊天 7. have a discussion进行讨论

　　8. put on wonderful performances 表演精彩节目 9. once-in-a-life-time难得的 10. start a five-day tour开始为期五天的旅行 11. can’t wait to do迫不及待地做

　　12. an unforgettable trip一次难忘的旅行 13. be impressed by对……印象深刻

　　14. set a good example to us为我们树立好榜样 15. win the first prize获得一等奖

　　16. take great pains to do sth. 不遗余力地做某事 17. be highly thought of 受到高度赞扬

　　18. have a sense of duty/responsibility 有责任感 19. be grateful to sb. 向某人致谢

　　20. express one’s gratitude to sb. 表达对某人的感激 1. 我们正在上语文课，老师突然滑倒了。 Last Monday， we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.

　　2. 我们正要出发，这时天下起雨来了。 We were about to set off when it began to rain.

　　相关句式 3. 我刚刚躺下，这时电话铃响了。 I had just lain down when the telephone rang.

　　4. 他一演讲完观众就欢呼起来。 No sooner had he finished his speech than

　　the audience started cheering. (同义句式：hardly…when… / as soon as…) 5. 一到达，我们就开始工作。 Upon arrival,

　　we began to work immediately.

　　6. 一听到铃声，学生都尽快跑进教室。 On hearing the bell,

　　students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. 7. 我让他进来后不久，他就伏在桌上哭了起来。 Shortly after I let him come in,

　　he cried on his desk.

　　8. 在那之后，我们举行了聚会。有的人唱歌，有的人跳舞或轮流讲故事。 After that,

　　we had a party. Some of us sang; others danced or told stories in turn. 9. 从这次经历中，我意识到，我们可以从帮助别人中得到幸福。 From the experience I realize that we can gain happiness from helping others.

　　10. 我觉得这次活动很有意义，我学会了与人沟通。 I find the activity meaningful, for I have learnt how to communicate with others. 技巧点拨

　　1. 记叙事件经过一般按照事件发展 的顺序来写。

　　2. 表示先后顺序的词有at first, at the beginning (of),

　　then，later，next，afterwards，soon after that, finally, before, during, after, the next day, on the third day, on the last day of等。 3. 若试题要求考生写自己的感受，考生不能只是用I am very happy等简单句，而是尽量用复合句来充分表达自己的观点。另外，记叙文多涉及情感相关的单词，考生平时可以多积累这样的单词或短语，如an unforgettable experience， to my joy/ delight, be satisfied/content with等。

　　时间：2016年12月1日 星期六8:30 启程 集合地点：校门口 车程：一个半小时自行车车程 目 的 地：红十字会医院 活动内容：亲切交谈、牵手跳舞、赠送礼物、拍照留念、共进午餐后返回 感受：…… ☆典型例题

　　假设你参加了你校在世界艾滋病日(the World Aids Day)组织的“关爱生命携手 ‘艾滋’儿童”的活动。 ［写作内容］ 请你写一篇英文日记，叙述活动情况，内容包括： December 1st 2016

　　Saturday

　　Fine

　　Today is the World Aids Day， so our school organized an activity called

　　“Take care of our lives， hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m., we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip， which took us about one hour and a half.

　　Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying，we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going，and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well，we presented our gifts，took lots

　　of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very glad to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of. ☆课堂练习

　　On May Day, my classmates and I attended a three-day visit organized by the International Travel Agency. No sooner had I arrived in Beijing by train than we took the bus to the Tian’ anmen Square, where we watched the soldiers raise the national flag.

　　The next day, when visiting the Great Wall, we were attracted by its greatness and admired the wonder created by the ancient people. On the last day, we paid a visit to our dreaming universities—Beijing University and Tsinghua University, which impressed us by their beautiful campus and fancy architecture.

　　So unforgettable is the experience that I think it well worth a second visit. ☆课外作业

　　On October 15th, all the 45 members

　　of the Students’ Union took part in the volunteer work for the sports meeting on

　　the school playground. I worked from 7 to 12 in the morning and from 2 to half past

　　six in the afternoon. I edited the articles of each class and broadcast them to cheer the athletes.

　　What’s more, I broadcast the results and announced the award list. Although I was exhausted and had a sore throat, I was praised and it was worthwhile.

　　亮点点击：时间的表达from 7 to 12 in

　　the morning and from 2 to half past six in

　　the afternoon.十分简练，表示感受的句子Although I was exhausted and had a sore throat, I was praised and it was worthwhile.可套用在读写任务中描述经历感受部分。 * * * * * *