2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错62

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

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　　假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换批改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

　　Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a

　　dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The

　　water had come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock.

　　After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After

　　a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been

　　done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the

　　Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's

　　terribly! Especially when there was no water.

　　2.文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及修改词均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　This morning I was about to leave for school then suddenly I heard my name called． She was Mother． “ John, puts on more clothes, and you’ll catch cold． It is so cold outside．” “ I don’t think it is cold today,” I said impatiently, ran away before she could say a word． Seated in front of the classroom, I was listening to my teacher careful． However, it was not yet nine o’clock when it was started to snow． I began to shake with cold． After all, a thin jacket is poor protection of the cold weather． I caught a bad cold． If only I had followed Mother’s advices!

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

　　I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school． I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel

　　like prisoner． I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet． The only thing I have to do it is studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply． There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．

　　Best wishes，

　　Li Ping

　　4.

　　文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意:

　　1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky bird recovered soon. When it was time for the bird to fly away, they felt pity but were very delightful. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.

　　5.短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出增加的词;

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

　　I went to the wildlife park together with parents last Sunday. There were lots of visitors who standing before the ticket window. We waited long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, but I had to walk home covering as much as 5 kilometers.

　　6.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．

　　试卷答案

　　1.1. On→In 2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4. after→until 5. the→a 6. tired→tiring 7. 去掉to 8. subject→subjects 9. 正确 10. terribly→ terrible

　　2.

　　leave for school then suddenly…

　　then改成when

　　She was Mother．

　　She 改成It

　　…puts on more clothes…

　　puts 改成put

　　…and you’ll catch cold…

　　and 改成or

　　…ran away before she…

　　ran改成running或者前加and

　　Seated in front of…

　　front 前加the

　　…to my teacher careful．

　　careful 改成carefully

　　…when it was started to…

　　去掉was

　　…protection of the cold weather

　　of改成against或from

　　…followed Mother’s advices !

　　advices改成advice

　　3.

　　I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school．I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel

　　grade

　　uneasy

　　like∧prisoner．I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet．The only thing I have to do it is

　　a

　　studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply．There’s a generation gap

　　get

　　among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to bebetween

　　so/and

　　is

　　colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as

　　Why

　　to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．

　　enter

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Ping

　　4.

　　was 改为 were;

　　catch 改为 caught;

　　out 改为 up;

　　Think 改为 Thinking

　　to 去掉

　　but 改为and

　　delightful 改为delighted

　　him 改为 them

　　respects 改为 respect

　　which 前加in；或把which 改成that；或把which 去掉

　　5.

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　　my

　　或其后加were

　　standing before the ticket window. We waited∧long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger

　　a

　　Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my

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　　steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for

　　from

　　looking

　　them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I

　　Wandering

　　Worse

　　had no money, but I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometers.

　　so

　　6.

　　Great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses,

　　which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious

　　lay

　　a

　　seriously

　　polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on

　　which

　　Worse

　　the southwest side of the lake used up a great dealgood soil．Now poor house have been

　　of

　　houses

　　replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers

　　used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his

　　plough

　　their

　　spare time boating and fishing．