2016年高考第二轮复习英语（广东版）专题升级训练卷十七写作综合训练卷（三）(附答案)

　　2016年高考第二轮复习英语广东版

　　专题升级训练十七　写作综合训练（三）

　　A组

　　第一节　基础写作

　　以下是一则关于首届中学生“春晚”的报道的主要内容。

　　主题 首届全国中学生“春晚”

　　——“轮到我们了”

　　组织者 一群广州中学生

　　时间 2012年1月15日，节目时长180分钟

　　内容 学生喜欢的各种节目，如街舞等

　　特色 1．自编、自导、自演

　　2．传统节目与新潮节目的结合

　　目的 1．给中学生提供展现才华的机会

　　2．让观众更多地了解岭南文化

　　参考词汇：首届全国中学生“春晚”：the first National Middle School Students' Spring Festival Show

　　【写作内容】

　　请根据以上内容用英语报道这一则校园资讯。内容包括：

　　1．晚会的基本信息。

　　2．晚会的目的与特色。

　　【写作要求】

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

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　　参考范文：

　　A group of students from Guangzhou plan to hold the first National Middle School Students' Spring Festival Show. The three­hour show with its theme “It's Our Turn” will be held on Jan. 15th. The performances, all organized, directed and performed by the students themselves, will combine traditional styles with more modern ones that students today are greatly interested in, such as street dancing and B­Box. The show gives a good chance for middle school students to show their talent to the world. It will also be a great chance for the audiences to learn more about Ling Nan culture.

　　第二节　读写任务

　　阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Wang Yue，who was two years old，wandered away from her home in Foshan while her mother was quickly collecting laundry during a thunderstorm.She walked into a narrow，busy market street.Closed­circuit television cameras（闭路电视摄像机）captured the child wandering into the street.In only a few moments of her appearance on the screen，Wang Yue is struck by a white van（货车），knocked to the ground and goes under the van's front wheels.The van driver pauses，but does not get out.After a moment，he pulls forward slowly，at which time his rear wheel drives over Wang.The driver moves on.Subsequently，at least 18 people walk past her，and fail to assist her，some pausing to stare before moving on.In that time，another large truck runs over Wang's legs with both front and back tires.She is eventually helped by a female who collects rubbish，Chen Xianmei.It is apparent in the video that Wang is crying，holding her head，moving her arms and legs，and bleeding.However，seven days later，the lovely girl died of brain failure.Wang's parents Wang Chichang and Qu Feifei chose not to blame anyone besides themselves for their daughter's death.Qu said “Granny Chen represents the best of human nature；it's the nicest and most natural side of us.”The drivers of both vehicles were kept by police in the days after the incident.

　　Closed­circuit film of the incident was broadcast by a local television station，then posted on­line.The film resulted in worldwide news reports and caused dozens of editorials（社论）and millions of posts on social media sites，the majority criticizing the callousness（冷漠）and cruelty of those who passed Wang Yue without helping her.

　　According to China Daily，“At least 10 Party and government departments and organizations in Guangdong，including the province's commission on politics and law，the women's federation，the Academy of Social Sciences，and the Communist Youth League，have started discussions on punishing those who refuse to help people who clearly need it.”

　　【写作内容】

　　1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容。

　　2．然后以约120个词就“是否应该助人”为主题进行议论，内容包括：

　　（1）你阅读短文后的感受。

　　（2）假如你在现场的话，你会如何做？

　　（3）你认为应该怎样做才能避免这样的悲剧再次发生？

　　【写作要求】

　　1．你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料中的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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　　参考范文：

　　Two­year­old Wang Yue died in a traffic accident near a market in Foshan without receiving timely help from truck drivers and passers­by.This aroused the criticism for their indifference and cruelty and led to a heated discussion on punishing those who refuse to give help.

　　After reading the report，I feel really shocked.How can anyone be so cold­hearted and turn a blind eye towards the victim？The passers­by should be criticized for their indifference and the two drivers must be severely punished for their hit­and­run behavior.

　　Had I happened to be there，I would have tried to do something helpful，like stopping the truck or the van hitting Yue Yue，calling 120 for an ambulance and asking others nearby to help get her parents.

　　To stop such tragedy from happening again，something must be done.First，the government should encourage people to help others in times of emergency and protect helpers so that anyone can offer assistance without any worries that the victims may sue them for compensation.Besides，parents should look after their young children responsibly.Last but not least，the media should spare no effort to praise those kind­hearted people and give correct guidance to the public.

　　B组

　　第一节　基础写作

　　以下是你校英语辩论会的情况。

　　*学科竞赛：academic competition

　　【写作内容】

　　根据以上辩论会情况为某英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

　　1．辩论的时间及主题。

　　2．辩论的内容和启示。

　　【写作要求】

　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

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　　参考范文：

　　A debate on the “Advantages and disadvantages of students' attending academic competitions” was carried out last Thursday in our school.Those who support it hold the views that such competitions can stimulate their interest in a specific subject，promote the understanding of the subject and foster the spirit to explore.However，those who are against it argued that academic competitions are disturbing their normal studies，which will lead to unbalanced learning and frustration.Some students may even suffer from physical and mental problems because of unbearable pressure to win the contest.From the debate we learned that every coin has two sides and we should deal with things appropriately.

　　第二节　读写任务

　　Nowadays，a brand new way of shopping is attracting increasing customers：online group buying，also known as collective buying，which offers products and services at reduced prices on the condition that a minimum number of buyers would make the purchase.Origins of group buying can be traced to China where group buying or team buying was executed to get discount prices when a large group of people were willing to buy the same item.

　　China group buying transaction volume hit $1.74 billion （RMB 11 billion）in 2011，up 550% from the same period in 2010，according to a report by Tuan800.com，the Beijing­based daily deal sites aggregator.The report also shows that 2011 was the year that the Chinese Group­buying market got more and more concentrated with more and more Chinese，

　　most of whom are white collars，teenagers and college students enjoying the benefits of group buying.And among the most favorable buying categories are restaurant，movie and hotel booking for travelling.

　　Through group buying，on one hand，customers get a lower price than normal.On the other hand，businessmen also cut down expenses on marketing.That is the reason why group buying websites spring up like mushrooms in recent months.What is the most attractive in group buying must be the unbelievable discounts.Facing the discounts，customers always couldn't resist the impulse to buy the products，even though they do not need them.

　　【写作内容】

　　1．以约30个词概括短文的要点。

　　2．以约120个词写一篇关于“团购”的短文，至少包括以下的内容要点：

　　（1）你对团购的看法并陈述理由。

　　（2）谈谈你自己或他人的一次团购经历。

　　（3）请你给团购者一些有用的建议。

　　【写作要求】

　　1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，或其他论述方法，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。

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　　参考范文：

　　The passage introduces the concept of group buying and its origins.Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given.

　　From my point of view，the advantages of group buying are obvious.For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price.For another，manufacturers can sell goods on a larger scale and reduce marketing expenses.

　　Last week，I surfed a well­known group buying website for two film tickets.With only 30 yuan，I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much.It was a very nice experience.

　　As for suggestions for group buying，firstly，you should read the advertisements and the comments from other customers carefully.Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is.Thirdly，it is better to shop on famous and reliable websites to avoid being cheated by some cheating websites.