Some old people are not taken good care. 短文改错

　　Some old people are not taken good care. Their children don't visit themselves regularly. They don't have proper food or medicine when they are ill. The reasons for this are clearly. For one thing, many young people are so busy to look after their old parents. For another, some young people think it heavy burden to spend a lot of money on their parents.

　　It is the Chinese tradition respect the old and protect the young. The old people deserve our attention and love because they have made great contribution to our society. If that we don't treat the old properly today, we will be badly treated when we got old. Let's take action from now on. Let's show concern to the old around us.

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