考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改41

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　In reply to your advertisement in yesterdays newspaper, Im writing this letter to apply for the post of a secretary in your company. I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position.

　　I graduated from ABC University majoring in Secretary. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded scholarship each year. In addition, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in my previous work as a secretary. It seems to me that my working experience, together with my education background, has given me an ideal preparation to assume the role of a secretary in a firm like yours.

　　Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam，In reply to(用介词to) your advertisement in yesterdays newspaper, Im writing this letter to apply for the post of a secretary in your company. I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position.I graduated from ABC University majoring in Secretary. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded scholarship each year. In addition, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in my previous work as a secretary. It seems to me that my working experience, together with my education background, has given me an ideal preparation to assume the role of a secretary in a firm like yours.Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience. 【Yours truly， Li Ming】(落款部分位于信件的右下角) 点评：9分写的很好。语言简洁得体。