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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改38

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　　Sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Li Ming】(落款部分位于右下角)

　　点评：5-6分

　　虽然waitress是一个很普通的职业，但是这封求职信并不是很好写，第二段中你前两个方面的内容比较空洞，只是大概的说了一下有意愿有经验，所以要注意选材。

　　Dear Sir or Madam(加逗号) I am writing to express my interest to(一般用in， interest in)your recent advertised position for a waitress in your restaurant(拼写错误). Enclosed with this letter is my resume which further details my qualifications and previous worke(拼写错误)experience. As a young man whose primary interest is in providing service to others, I find the position does fall in with my former training and strength. No(应该是Not)only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly man who can quickly establish the rapport with people of all ages. I appreciate your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. 【Sincerely(一般用Yours sincerely，注意最后有逗号)

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