I am responding to your ad in the October 10,2011,the Sunday issue of the China Daily ,for the position of the editor.It prompts me to offer you my qualifications because your requirements closely parallel my qualification and working experience.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional imformation you require,please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Yours faithfully,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam:(英文信件中,这里用逗号) I am responding to your ad in the October 10,2011,the Sunday issue of the China Daily(这一部分比较乱) ,for the position of the editor. It prompts me to offer you my qualifications because your requirements closely parallel my qualification and working experience. I will be graduating(改成graduate,前边有will) from Graduate School of Tsinghua University this year with a master degree. I once worked as a graphic designer in a newspaper office for 2 years as a part-job(part-time job). And I have got some editing experiences in CCTV.I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements which you based on the advertisement. I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional imformation(拼写错误)you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview. 【Yours faithfully, LiMing】(落款部分位于右下方) 点评:6-7分写的还是不错的,注意这几个细节和格式上的错误。
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