考研英语作文批改范例6

　　To whom it may concern, 　　It would be one of my greatest pleasure, if the department concerned could help me find a candidate who meets my needs as follows: 　　For one thing, I hope that he or she is a such （such an）ambitious student that the candidate is aim to enter the university in the future. For another thing, the distance between the city of candidate and my place is the shortest possible route in order that I can have an opportunity to visit and care about this candidate face to face in my spare time. 　　I will send some money to my candidate monthly and encourage him or her to study better and face up to all kinds of pressure in life after I can get a chance to aid a student. 　　Therefore, although I am not a rich man in the society, I am willing to help those candidates as possible as I can in order to contribute to project Hope. 　　Yours Sincerely, 　　Li Ming