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Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a position of secretary.
I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could communication with foreigner fluently. Also I was past the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.
Please give me a(改为an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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Dear sir or madam,
I am writting(拼写错误,改为writing) this letter(删除) to apply for a position of(改为as) secretary.
I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication(改为communicate)with foreigner fluently. Also I was past(改为passed) the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.
Please give me a(改为an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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同学你好,你的英语基础比较薄弱,还是建议你多背模版,另外,你的应聘职位最好能与你的专业和工作经历相关。
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