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Dear Sir or Madam ,
I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .
I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature.In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as senior middle school. .
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .
I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of(改为proficient) skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature(这里填专业名称).In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as(serve as 后面加职位名称) senior middle school. .
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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同学你好,标点符号与后面的单词要空一格。你需要提高英语的表达能力,另外,你对模版也不熟悉,建议你多看一些英语作文,熟悉一下这类作文的写作思路。
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