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Dear Nero,
I am truly sorry that I broke an appointment.
You were agreed that we will have dinner together tonight , but I receiced an urgent phone call from my office and I had to leave immediately . Due to the mistake , you must felt much inconvenience . If it were not for , we would have a wonderful memory . You told me you have time every Sunday , lets set an appointment on next Sunday evening.
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Nero,
I am truly sorry that I broke an(改为the) appointment.
You were agreedthat we will have dinner together tonight, but I receiced(拼写错误,改为received) an urgent phone call from my office and I had to leave immediately . Due to the mistake , you must felt much inconvenience. If it were not for(改为If I hadnt left) , we would have a wonderful memory. You told me you have time every Sunday , lets set an appointment on next Sunday evening.
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4分
同学你好,注意定冠词和不定冠词的使用情景。建议你再复习一下虚拟语气的表达方式。另外,你需要多读一些英语的小文章,培养英文的思维习惯。
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