Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture,
2. point out the reasons for this phenomenon,and
3. suggest possible solutions.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
审题:
我们拿到题目后,首先要分析图画和提纲所构成的语境。对于全体考生来说,一个图画可能有不止一种含义,不同的写法都是可行的,都可能得高分,如2004年考研作文温室里的花朵经不起风雨就既可写孩子教育问题,也可以写入世后的部分中国企业的情况。但是对有些图画来说,有的理解就肯定是错误的,如2005年的考研,写成老年人加强体育锻炼的问题,就是不行的。对于大家来说,一定要加强审题的能力,平时多看多想,考试中就会水到渠成。
这篇文章分为三段。第一段是描述图画,第二段在引入主题后。
Sample:
In the above picture, a mother is seeing her son off at a railway station. It is most likely that the son is traveling by himself for the first time. We are most surprised to notice what the mother says: My son, all of the people on the train are vicious, so be careful to protect yourself.
Although this mother is radical to some extent, this picture reflects a worrying social problemloss of social trust. Three reasons, in my belief, can account for the current phenomenon. First, when economy develops quickly and resources become more and more limited, social competition will become more and more fierce, and people will concentrate on the protection of personal interests. Second, the present education puts emphasis on knowledge and skills instead of morality and ethics. Last but not the least, sometimes the mass media play a negative role in focusing on the dark side of society, such as murder and robbery.
It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to solve this problem quickly and effectively. In the first place, teachers and parents should try their best to cultivate love, affection and unselfishness in the hearts of adolescents. In the second place, the government, with the help of the mass media, should play a dominant role in the making of a harmonious society. When every one of us participates in this campaign, the restoration of mutual trust will not be far away.
点评:
这篇文章首段先描述图画,第二段开头做了一个关键性的工作确定本文章的主题。这个主题是由图画所决定的,也是根据提纲展开文章的基础。然后分三点来说明该问题的原因。第三段分两点来说明解决问题的办法。
心得:
文章没有第四段,这主要是由于第三段的最后一句带有结论性,是个非常成功的句子,亦可以写成:
When every one of us participates in this campaign, the dream of the restoration of mutual trust will be realized in the near future.
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