六级考试写作三段式剖析第二段

　　The reason why I cannot accept the job offered may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones.

　　三个层次：

　　first of all;

　　in addition;

　　furthermore.

　　first and foremost,

　　besides,

　　last but not least

　　In the first place

　　In the second place

　　In the third place

　　个人层面

　　1.个人的兴趣爱好

　　Doing something is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

　　(02.6)A great many university students are fond of surfing online.

　　Surfing online is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

　　As a result, a great many university students indulge themselves in the internet.

　　2.丰富/提高生活质量

　　Something helps to improve the quality of peoples lives.

　　例：The use of private cars helps to improve the quality of peoples lives.

　　3.运动健身

　　Regular exercises benefit both the body and mind.

　　4.社会责任感

　　Doing something will develop ones strong sense of duty.

　　5.参加活动，培养团队合作精神

　　Participating in activities can develop a sense of team spirit and cooperation.

　　6.人际关系

　　Doing something will enhance mutual understanding.

　　例：Talking with my roommates will enhance mutual understanding.

　　7.个人能力和职业发展

　　Doing something will develop ones capability and helps one to start a new career.

　　例：Working hard will develop ones capability and helps one to start a new career.

　　Getting proper training will develop ones capability and helps one to start a new career.

　　例：Working hard will develop ones capability and helps one to start a new career.

　　Getting proper training will develop ones capability and helps one to start a new career.

　　社会层面

　　1.促进经济发展

　　It helps to improve the economic strength. 。

　　例：The recent policy helps to improve the economic strength.

　　2.自然和社会资源

　　It will lead to great extravagance of natural resources and social resources.

　　例：Clear cutting will lead to great extravagance of natural resources.

　　3.科技发展

　　It is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking.

　　例：The development of science and technology is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking。

　　4、交通

　　Too many cars running on the streets lead to air pollution and noise pollution.

　　5.教育

　　好处之一：Get oneself acquainted with the latest development in science and technology.

　　好处之二：Broaden ones scope of knowledge.

　　6.旅游

　　The tourist industry has played an important role in meeting the cultural needs of the public and carrying forward national culture.

　　7.综合状况

　　The progress of our society is based on harmony.

　　基本思路：

　　主题句+解释+举例(进一步拓展延伸)

　　Topic:

　　Some people suggest that the government should invest a small amount of money, others think the museum is a financial burden? What do you think of it?

　　主题句：

　　一个东西给我们带来的好处，对我们产生的影响，或人们普遍的对这一事物的看法。

　　主题句举例：

　　博物馆可以记录国家的历史

　　1. Museums play an essential role in recording a countrys history.

　　1. Admittedly, museums, of course, play an essential role in recording a countrys history.

　　对主题句解释：

　　博物馆有很多代表一个国家过去的艺术品。

　　2. Museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a countrys glorious past.

　　2.As is known to the world, museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a countrys glorious past.

　　举例：

　　故宫博物馆里有很多文物。

　　3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a collection of antiques.

　　3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a huge collection of delicate antiques of artistic and historical value.

　　进一步拓展：Museum对人们的影响

　　影响之一：通过参观博物馆，人们可以学到关于历史和文化的东西。

　　4. By visiting museums, we can learn a lot about our history and culture.

　　4. It is widely acknowledged that we can learn a lot about our history and culture by visiting museums in our leisure time.

　　It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

　　It is universally acknowledged that

　　It is well accepted that

　　It is widely believed that

　　It is generally maintained that

　　继续引申：

　　有很多好处，例如可以完善人格.

　　5. A clear understanding of our history and culture does good to the development of well-rounded character.

　　5.It is a clear understanding of our history and culture that does good to the development of well-rounded character.

　　2006.12 首次英语新6级作文题The Importance of Reading Classics( 阅读经典的重要性)

　　提纲：1.阅读经典对人的成长至关重要;

　　2.人们越来越少地阅读经典，原因是

　　3.作为大学生，你应该怎么做。

　　主题句：

　　1. There are a lot of reasons for it.

　　理由之一：学生缺乏兴趣内容过时

　　2. In the first place, many college students take no interest in reading classics, for they find classics outdated.

　　理由一的延伸：

　　3. In other words, classics do not meet with their requirement of reading.

　　理由二：学生太忙，没时间阅读经典著作

　　4. In the second place, nowadays ,many university students are occupied from morning till night.

　　5. As a result, it is quite difficult for them to squeeze some time to read classics.

　　理由二的延伸：

　　6. Since many students dedicate themselves to studying the course work, they pay no attention to reading classics.

　　理由三：经典著作比较深奥，让人疲惫厌倦

　　7. In the third place, the contents of classics are usually filled with abstruse concepts and ideas.

　　理由三的延伸：

　　8. Therefore, college students invariably feel tired and bored in the process of reading.