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20大学英语四级写作试题考前热点高分范文(二)

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　　行文思路

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈我的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述月光族现象，引出对这一现象的不同看法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明我对月光族的看法并说明理由。

　　高分范文

　　The Moonlight Clan

　　Nowadays, more and more people, especially the young are joining in the army of the moonlight clan. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.

　　Those who support the moonlight clan think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. However, more other people criticize the moonlight clan. They say that the consumption habit of the moonlight clan is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will place the moonlight clan in a difficult position in case of unexpected expenses.

　　Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, though the moonlight clan may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, in the long term, it is unfavorable to their family and career. Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.

　　【亮点点评】

　　尤其，特别。

　　用于提出两种对立观点。

　　用于引出两种对立观点各自的理由。

　　使处于艰难的境地。

　　以防，万一。

　　用于表明我的倾向。

　　though引导让步状语从句。

　　从长远来看。

　　对不利。

　　引用谚语结尾，值得借鉴。

　　佳句临摩

　　1.佳句：Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.

　　临摩：勇敢的人往往会获得更多的机会，而懦弱的人面对机会也有可能错过。

　　2.佳句：Those who support the moonlight clan think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.

　　临摩：持悲观态度的那些人认为地球上有限的能源很快就会枯竭。

　　3.佳句：Just as a proverb says, o

　　, one should always prepare for a rainy day.

　　临摩：正如一句谚语所说的，机会只给那些有准备的人。

　　【KEY】

　　1. Brave people tend to get more opportunities while timid ones may miss them when chances come.

　　2. Those who hold pessimistic attitudes think that limited energy on earth will be exhausted soon.

　　3. Just as a proverb says, Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.

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