Im writting to apply for the position on your advertisement.I would be much grateful if youre so kind as to take my application into consideration.
I find myself quite fit for your position-accountant.To begin with,my major subject is account at university.Then,Im studying the CPA and other certificates as well.Im sure my preparation would conform to the job.
Thanks for your time .I wish you can give me a chance for interview. Look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
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Dear sir or madam(Sir or Madam), Im writting(拼写错误writing)to apply for the position on your advertisement. I would be much grateful if youre so kind as to take my application into consideration. I find myself quite fit for your position-accountant. To begin with, my major subject is account at university. Then, Im studying the CPA and other certificates as well. Im sure my preparation would conform to the job. Thanks for your time .I wish you can give me a chance for interview. Look forward to your reply. 【Yours sincerely, LiMing】(落款部分写在右下角) 点评：5-6分
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