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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改13

发布时间:2016-03-01  编辑:查字典英语网小编

  Im writing to apply for the position of Industrial Designer which you advertised in newspapers.

  Therere a number of reasons which I can qualify for this job. The first and foremost, I major in Design in University, and I can work in it faster than others. Second, I have some years of work experience about this job. At last, I not only have the capacity of the social contact, but also have the enthusiasm about this position.

  I would appreciate it if you would send me a reply at your earliest convenience.

  Yours sincerely

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Sir or Madam, Im writing to apply for the position of Industrial Designer which you advertised in newspapers. Therere a number of reasons which I can qualify for this job. The first and foremost(因为信件本身比较简洁,不要用很多的连词), I major in Design in University(没有说是具体的哪一所大学,不用大写首字母), and I can work in it faster than others(最好不要这样和别人进行比较,另外你不知道别的应聘者的水平). Second, I have some years of work experience about this job. At last, I not only have the capacity of the social contact, but also have the enthusiasm about this position. I would appreciate it if you would send me a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely(加逗号) Li Ming(与上边一行不要离这么远,落款这一部分要写在右下角) 点评:6-7分写的还不错的。写作内容方面需要适当调整,建议同学看一些范文。

  

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