考研英语作文热门话题范文:如此承诺
AS Is shown above,a funny hen claimed that her eggs with no edge and the like which is the most fundamntional.Simple as the drawing is ,the symbolic meaning behind ti is as deep as oceanThe honest is not only necessary,but also indepensible.As the old Chinese proverb says.Honest is gold.However,in no country other than China,it has been said that,the problum of opposite the pormise more serious ,and people fail to attach attention to the gold.Individuals and organizations can make money,take porfits and even obtain wealth by attend promise.To be honest can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge,giving us a new perspective of outside world.According to a survey conducted by China Acadmyof Science,honest can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problumsas depression,stress,isolation and solitudeAll in all,obtainthe promise plays a key role in our daily life.The unhonest, in view of the complexity of such issue,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally.with a proper law,an up-to-date solution,a right perspective and alert public,it will be a matter of time before the problum becomes things of the past.
点评
作文能够按照写作要求来写,写作格式基本符合要求。但是文中的问题较多,比如:单词的拼写问题、语法问题、句子的逻辑关系问题等。希望作者在后面的复习中,先不要急于写文章,从基本的入手,先积累词汇、学习基本语法、积累并模仿高分语言佳句;将重点放在语句模仿上,有空多读外文期刊,了解英语的地道表达,从而不断提高自己的写作水平。建议作者将每周的时间做一个合理的规划,一周练习一篇作文即可,在练习这篇作文时,可先积累此方面的词汇,之后两天可查找有关方面的经典表达及例文,然后再模仿佳句,等这些都做到位时,再组织文章。
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