They are wasting resources, for example, time, energy and money.
上面这句话不错,只是转折词for example不妥当;应该这样:
They are wasting resources. For example, they use too much time, energy and money.
不然就要换一换转折词,改用such as或like:
They are wasting resources, such as (or like) time, energy and money.
不管任何语言,转折词(transitional words)都扮演着一个重要角色,就是:承先启后,使句子紧凑,段落相吸,对文章结构,有良性作用。但是有些人几乎没有采用转折词的习惯,结果文句松散,上下文七零八乱,应该避免。
现在把主要转折词,分类列下,供大家参考。
Ⅰ表示尤有进者的意思:
Again, also, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover, next, in addition等,如:
① Jason teaches diligently. Besides, he writes a lot.
② English is a useful language. For one thing, it is an official language in the UN. Then, it is widely used in business, science and technology.
Ⅱ表示反意见:
But, however, still, yet, after all, for all that, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand等,如:
③ Jim is intelligent but lazy.
④ Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary, it is very small.
Ⅲ表示困果关系:
Therefore, so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result 等,如:
⑤ Some people are over-ambitious. As a result, they are usually unhappy.
⑥ Tom did not work hard; hence, he failed.
Ⅳ表示比较关系:
Likewise, similarly, in a like manner 等,如:
⑦ You cannot writes without a pen. Likewise, you cannot cook without rice.
⑧ No one is allowed to speak Mandarin in an English class. Similarly, no one is allowed to speak English in a Mandarin class.
Ⅴ表示举例示范:
For example, in other words, for instance, that is 等,如:
⑨ There are some common errors in his composition. For instance, it is wrong to use he to replace the queen.
Ⅵ表示结束:
To sum up, in brief, in short, on the whole, to conclude 等,如:
⑩ Some say Singapore is a nice place to live in. Others say it is not so nice. It is too competitive. In short, some like Singapore; some do not.
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 105:Full of mistakes
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 71:He’s awful
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 85:Pairs in the spring
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 131:Don’t be so sure
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 95:Tickets,please
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 89:For sale
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 109:A good idea
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 133:Sensational news
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 115: Knock,knock
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 75:Uncomfortable shoes
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 59:Is that all
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 49:At the butcher’s
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 69:The car race 汽车比赛
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 91:Poor Ian
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 119:A true story
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 53:An interesting climate
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 97:A small blue case
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 121:The man in the hat
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 67:The weekend
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 73:The way to King Street
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 81:Roast beef and potatoes
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 107:It’s too small
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 83:Going on holiday
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 101:A card from Jimmy
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 51:A pleasant climate
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 117: Tommy’s breakfast
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 93:Our new neighbour
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 57:An unusual day
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 111:The most expensive model
新概念英语第一册 Lesson 65:Not a baby
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